Going With The Flow (poem) by Kimmy Van Kooten on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Chris Fitzgerald (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2006

she studied her reflection in the mirror.
clever
Chrissy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 24, 2006

Thank you for sharing your wit and humor, Kimmy. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on November 23, 2006

LOL is right!! SO funny & clever. . .creative!! Flow ON!! :) 'Pea' :)

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on November 23, 2006

LOL, gotta roll with the flow.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on November 21, 2006

Ha, ha, ha....I think as wives we've all been there and done that. OH the toilet seat..that really makes me mad...and the ending been there too! Like I said I think we all have...great write. Hang in there!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on November 21, 2006

I'd kill over the toilet seat! My four boys and husband learned quick that the only way to avoid the 'Bangee screech' in the middle of the night was to put that sucker down... Great write, made me smile.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Tamara Perlin (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2006

I like how the tables, or shall I say the flow, have turned on the last one. Sounds like the red sea has flown upstream and up sh!t's creek. What a little sh!t!! ~Mara

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 21, 2006

Politically perfect...we can dug up even more if the mood strikes a bad nerve huh???

Thanks for the insight....lol!!

Got to love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on November 21, 2006

well...heheheeheh...I must say, I have red...er...um...read a great deal of poetry in my time...but I do believe this is the first one addressing PMS...or at least one that could be a poster for it.
Frankly, I found it delightful...humorous to be sure...but also very real.
This is very well done, Kimmy.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 21, 2006

Going with the Flow - HO HO HO!! And LOL at George!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

Tomorrow never comes get rid of this bum.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

For Andy... you almost get it...Ed...you way off!
LOL!
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

lEAVING THE SEAT UP AT ANY TIME OF THE MONTH IS THE PITS...ESPECIALLY AT THAT 'SPECIAL' TIME OF THE MONTH...eD

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

Good for you Kimmy
You got him where it hurts
lovely and humorous
enjoyed much

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

The last line is a punch line? yet I don't get it, or is this about someone breaking down...

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

Oh Kimmy, did you make me laugh with this one! Way to go girl! Love Holly

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

'Tis humorous all the way! Clever interjection...those "Going with the flow~~~" :o) Original and witty.

Micke

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

Kimmy, precious little light sis, little joy Kimmy..There are angels all around you!!..I have to give hats off to you for the beautiful gift you have given, eleven beautiful kids and a wonderful marriage~~ I admire you more than you will ever know, sweetness...Your with the light of God in your duties!! WE all are chosen for certain things, ordained and yours is so nobel, so richly we are blessed with your presence..Never foreget it!!

Love & Prayers,
Dove

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on November 20, 2006

Yes, this is humorous, but has a lesson to be learned.
Rusty