Here I am, in sunset's last light
Still beside you, it's our eternal night.
Sorrow croons a serenade anew
And I sing along about your miscue.
You have no heat, your eyes are dry,
you have just this little tie,
and just this little cavity,
where I searched for your heart
- that you promised to me.
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Reviewed by Justin Steele (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2007
I feel cool... this is an icy piece. I think that if someones been here in there life... its a very heart felt cluster of thoughts, feelings... of pain. Raped is a good word. Only time wold heal this heart and scars would always remain.
Too many wear devious masks that pull us into false intrigues.
If this was a work of imagination Lara - I commend you. If this was an extrapolation of real life - I commend you strength and ability to hit the nail on the head!
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nice piece.
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If this was a work of imagination Lara - I commend you. If this was an extrapolation of real life - I commend you strength and ability to hit the nail on the head!
Filled with bubbling emotion ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Never put your complete trust in another !
Peter