Mother was an Irish lass
who kept her rambunctious nature
mostly hidden after she married Dad,
such a proper English gentleman was he.
Eyes of blue and skin so fair
she had, with flaming red hair
she kept confined in a chignon
whenever she was within his sight.
But when he was away
her hair came down and her fiery
spirit led us to dance and sing.
We’d dance a jig around the table,
out the door and up the hill
laughing and hollering
the way only the Irish can do.
She had an emerald green petticoat
she kept in a secret drawer
and would wear on such occasions
and carefully hidden under her dress
on each St. Patrick’s Day.
She told me once that Dad never knew.
Her funeral was a somber affair
not the Irish wake she would have preferred.
When the time came for Dad to join her
I found underneath his pillow,
folded into a neat and tidy packet,
Mother’s emerald green petticoat
and a photograph of her dancing a jig
upon the hill her petticoat plainly showing
her flaming red hair in wondrous disarray.
Marcia - When I saw the bright green Irish illustrations, I expected a limerick. Instead I found a poignant story of life. I felt the love of those last lines:
When the time came for Dad to join her
I found underneath his pillow,
folded into a neat and tidy packet,
Mother’s emerald green petticoat
and a photograph of her dancing a jig
upon the hill her petticoat plainly showing
her flaming red hair in wondrous disarray.
Well done Marcia. The last stanza grasped my heart. Thank you for this sweet and beautiful write.
Love,
Linda
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2009
I do not know how you did it, but, with that final stanza, you tweaked something in me and made me cry. Kudos to you for that; it is not easy to do :-)
Tears flow as I pictured the jig up the hill, around the table and under his pillow. Oh this is so beautiful Marcia...what a memory you have in your heart. Love and hugs, Bonnie
That's a good story to tell in the wee hours, when the singers felt asleep and the fireplace was showing the blushing of the last embers!
Thank you, wild life lass!
A short story of mine was included in an anthology of short fiction by fourteen of Port Town Publishing Company's authors. It is out of print and no longer available except as a download. Contact me at charlenetess@yahoo.com if you want it.
For the past two years (2006-2008) The Bridge of Silver Wings has earned a name for itself both as a series of poems published in different e-zines and as a book first published in 2007.
What makes this 2009 edition a special one is th
When the time came for Dad to join her
I found underneath his pillow,
folded into a neat and tidy packet,
Mother’s emerald green petticoat
and a photograph of her dancing a jig
upon the hill her petticoat plainly showing
her flaming red hair in wondrous disarray.
- David
Your words made me laugh and cry. Thanks, Liz
Love,
Linda
Ted
John
Be always safe,
Karen
Thank you, wild life lass!
Georg