Shards of memories, like broken glass, cut visions of tomorrows into slivers of anxiety
Paths into love glitter with brilliant lights of pain-pleasure enticement
Brave I the pain, or stay? Endure brutal agony, or isolated self? Step I carefully into torturous tomorrows? Will dreaded imagination of sorrow place me by myself?
NO!!!
I stepped out, I cried Then ran, I wept Time passed, I smiled Then laughed and loved freely.
After years of moments I look back to see the crimson trace faded. Shards are lost memories
gosh who sings, it
the line goes
Should I stay or should I go now?
If you stay and it works out you are blessed, if things that promt the considering of going stay as is......
life is a prision sentenance......
thought provoking
oh boy
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
I am in love
and am loved
forever... <-----truth conquers by itself..profound truth excellent poem... superb penn
Good writer that you are, you continue to give your readers the best of your enourmous talent. Thank you for this offering... a serious study of life and love's rewards. You do it so wonderfully well.
- bill
Yes you are!... "Shards of Memories" proves that there is nothing we can't overcome, with Love!
We walk in faith always, knowing, we are Loved, forever!
Awesome write Rusty!
I see your soul was searching... and the Spirit answered!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy
Powerful, poignant verse, Rusty, a side many don't see often. Do you write humor to hide the pain inside? Excellent write.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
When we are sad we tend to remember happier days, when we are happy and especially in love we live in the present. Lesson: we should always be in love. Excellent poem. Victor
And yet one more shared side of Mr. Daily's unbridled talent as a writer -- and what a treasured glimpse it is. This is a touching expose' of love, loss, and hope. Well done, Rusty-friend, this is exceptional writing. More, more ...
Miss you hugs,
CJ
This is absolutely beautiful...I sense a broken heart that has mended as well as a hurtful memory that has faded. We can love again, spiritual love, and love for another...prayer brings us through the hurt and allows us to overcome. Again, this is a beautiful write, I enjoyed it tremendously.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
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gosh who sings, it
the line goes
Should I stay or should I go now?
If you stay and it works out you are blessed, if things that promt the considering of going stay as is......
life is a prision sentenance......
thought provoking
oh boy
and am loved
forever... <-----truth conquers by itself..profound truth excellent poem... superb penn
- bill
We walk in faith always, knowing, we are Loved, forever!
Awesome write Rusty!
I see your soul was searching... and the Spirit answered!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Micke
Miss you hugs,
CJ
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling