Everything's right about "What's Wrong," a very delightful and enjoyable prose. Made me laugh and me cry; hope you find your beau. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria
My holy. Thank you so much for your support. You have given me such a treasure, such a feed back - May every minute sing for you in silent. I know of course my English must be a bit clumsy, but what´s perfect in life? Thank you, thank you.
Funny and beautiful at the same time, Unnur! I am a big fan of snow and the scandinavian countries so this poem fell like a crystal into my lap. Best wishes kenny
The Commander and the Chief take on the rogue Deep State: the Gunfight at the UK Corral, missing Redcoats in the Nevada Triangle, and nuclear blackmail!
BLIND!
Ross Miller doesn’t have anything to live for anymore. An RPG attack in Afghanistan left him blind and he thought helpless.
He tried going home but that didn’t work out. Luke and Amber Owens who were both wounded in the same
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i enjoyed the logic and concept of this poem ...
Susan
I like your poem,
good observations
keep looking.........maybe he is under that snow, and you will find him come the spring thaw
pax A
Wonderful write!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)