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Under A Coconut Tree
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My honey was standing under a coconut tree Looking as fine as he could ever be. When Suddenly from out of the blue. A huge coconut fell hitting him right up side of his head. It knocked him right down on his little bony tail. That is when i noticed his head began to swell. His laughter was all in total disguise, For you could see the tears clouding his eyes. He painfully grined as he then stated "You can't hurt steel for it can only melt"! HA! Yet the pain on his face was ever so real. But for the life of him he would not admit, just how sore he truly felt. As he stood there looking so dazed and confused, A bubble appeared with a big nasty bruise. Now never again shall you ever see My honey standing under a coconut tree. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Trixie Love ~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Reviews of "Under A Coconut Tree"

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2002

Nice one!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2002

A humorous write....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2002

Enjoyed this poem. I am looking for the man that says ouch! :-)

Reviewed by Gilles Marchand

Reviewed on October 20, 2001

I'm laughing so hard I have tears running out of my eyes!!!! Remind me to never sit under a coconut tree! ouch!
Blue eyed fish...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on October 19, 2001

Just fantastic Trixie!

Reviewed by Audrey Cooper (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2001

Hi Trixie, I love it!

Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2001

Hi Trixie,
I will attempt to speak for the men, you really didn't think he would admit to it do you?
LOL! I wouldn't! good one Trix. Thank you for all your thoughts.
Friends always,
Gregg

Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2001

Well sister,
one huge hearty laugh for me this morning!! Soooo rocked my belly .Teeeeheeeeeee!!!

Goddess Power, Jo

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 19, 2001

Wow Trixie, This is so interesting, the way that you've compared the coconut hitting your baby and the pains of this life, how they too can hit you just like a falling coconut, we tend to learn from these experiences to get out of the way of pain coming our way. Sometimes in doing so we miss a lot of beauty. I know that I have been guilty of this. Great write! Janet xoxoxo

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