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Under A Coconut Tree
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~ Under A Coconut Tree ~
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~



My honey was standing
Under a coconut tree,
Looking as fine as he
Could ever be.

~*~

When all of the Sudden
From out of the blue,
A huge coconut fell
Hitting him hard
Right up side of his head.

~*~

It knocked him right down
On his little bony tail.
That is when I noticed
That his head began to swell.

~*~

Oh how his laughter was
All in total disguise,
For you could see the
Tears flooding up his eyes.

~*~

He so painfully grined
As he then stated,
"You can't hurt steel
For it can only melt"! HA!

~*~

Yet the pain on his face
Was ever so real.
But for the life of him
He would not admit,
Just how bad he truly felt.

~*~

As he stood there looking
So dazed and confused,
A bubble appeared with
A big nasty bruise.

~*~

The moral to this story is.
Never again will one see,
My honey ever standing
"Under A Coconut Tree."

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~





By:Trixie Love
(c) 2003

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 Reviews of "Under A Coconut Tree"
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
This was great! So funny and cute!

Reindeer

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Trixie ... everything you do shines likes the stars. This is so cute that I cried on it. What lovely work you do. I stand in awe of your talent. Gosh there is so much in your mind that your brillance creates each poem. If I remember right, the song is "It's Twilight Time", by the Platters.
I go way back dear: I remember when it was released. I was there. Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
I love this Trixie! ! Also, one of my favorite songs "Twilight Time" think I'll stay awhile at Trixies lovely Den!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
LOL Wonderful write!
Jack

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
not unless you wear a helmet ;)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Funny, Funny,:)

ty
tony

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
hee hee LOL thiws was to hilariously funny that poor honeyLOL great job on this

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Great moral, great humorous poem.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
This a cute wtire, monkey pictures and all

William

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Aw. this is so cute Trixie, and the pic is adorable

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
LOL>>LOL>>> So funny!!! Thanks for the smile


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