As i stood there
in your shadow
I felt the darkness
of your soul.
For I sensed your
fears accept life,
As well as the fears
to accept the unknown.
Please take hold of
my hand.
For i shall guide you
through your darkness.
Pour all of your pain
upon me,
For i shall take it
and cast it all aside.
Please have faith in me.
Allow me to enter into
your darkened soul.
For i shall guide you
towards the light.
I shall help you face
all of your fears.
Upon returning from
this fascinating journey.
You shall return with
such love and courage.
To face and accept all
of the unknown powers.
That you have always
possessed so deep within.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Trixie Love
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Reviews of "Shadow Of Darkness"
Reviewed by Laura
Reviewed on April 6, 2002
That was a wonderful read! How dark it starts out and ends on such a positive note.
Laura
Reviewed by Jennifer Choate (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2002
Trixie this is great. I am always drawn to the darker side of poetry, though I don't write about it much. I too like the way you moved from darkness to light. Wonderful!!
Jen
Wonderful, Trixie...understanding and the offer of help...who wouldn't appreciate that!
much love,
Gina
Reviewed by Muhammad Ali Panhwar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2001
~~Wonderful~~
Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2001
Good morning Trxie,nice thoughts here,you know that I write alot about shadows and darkness so I just had to read this one,great job kid,,ps I didnt mean to make anyone sad with my last poem,,,,sorry,,,,,your friend,,Charlie
Our culture has taught us to believe in many ideas which aren't actually real. Exposing these illusions allows us to recover the power to live our lives according to our deepest desires.
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Laura
Jen
Caryn
This is wonderful work!! So full of truth!
Blessings to you and yours! Thank you!
I got this one! hummmm!
Yes and you are right! on the track!
Always...
BEFF...
Wonderful!
Your Poetry Friend
Audrey
much love,
Gina