Time is thought of meaning witch passes
Thru threads that dangle to sea...
A crown that has resin only
To awake from the dreams of eternity...
Call's that dance with ray's of light
Tree's that have fallen...
I smile within...
As I look within you...
Your moon light...
Meter is a little off, and misspellings, but I like the verse itself. Need some polish. 'Witch', should be spelled 'which'. 'Thought of meaning' would read better if it was 'thought and meaning' and first line needs a break...shift 'which passes' to next line. That's where the meter is off. Would be a good poem otherwise. ~E
The first instalment of The Tales of Bowen unfolds a mesmerizing anthology of narratives intricately woven together by a grand overarching storyline, set against the enchanting backdrop of the mystical realms of Dagonfell.
After finding a map on a grueling hunt, Vanx and his new companions decide to travel deep into the Bitterpeaks, where a fabled hoar witch's crystal palace supposedly sits hidden in a valley called Saint Elm's Deep.
Olive the Green Dream Train invites Danielle and Nina to come with her to plant special trees that can heal the atmosphere better than other trees can. A mysterious angel guides them, and the Dark Phantom tries to mess everything up again.
Your green-eyed cat
what lovely words...from a beautiful heart.
talk to you soon.
hugs always
krissy
debby
Call me soon
Miss ya!
Sandie Angel :o)
Pretty piece. Gregg