Dark-night-Soul...! (poem) by Gilles G Marchand on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by JoAnne Buchanan

Reviewed on July 2, 2002

I once knew a man named Gilles Marchand..
Who seemed loving enough to take my hand...
He swept me off my feet..
Then in time I saw he just used me deep...
Did he not see my inner beauty inside...?
I guess not because his heart was not truly open to confide...
I left one snowy morning out of Calgary on a bus..
Thinking he would wait for me, what did I know,in his arrms right away to another he just had to rush....
Then came word that I truly never meant anything to him at all...
For after two months of me gone...
Back with someone else...
I saw you as my hummingbird...
I gave you your wings...
But you braught me only thoughts of suicide and tears...
Did I not mean anything to you when you left for the states..?
Did you not think word wouldn't get out about your fate..?
please take my pictures down...
For I am no longer smiling as inside i cry and frown...
What joy it gave me to wake in the morning to set your coffee on the table shelf...
Guess that's where my heart will mend in my own inner beauty self...
Try and find a one who was as beautiful inside and out...
You'll search and search a lifetime to see you already had and lost her on that bus headed south..

Sorry we ever met

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2002

I see you have been there. Good write.

Reviewed by Caryn Day-Suarez

Reviewed on June 10, 2002

Bloop, bloop my favorite fish!! Hope your bloops are not as blue as your eyes! Good to see ya back!

Your green-eyed cat

Reviewed by Caryn Day-Suarez

Reviewed on June 5, 2002

Just know I light a speacial white candle for you every single day with prayers for you ..Always in my heart and prayers..

Love, Jo

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 3, 2002

Hi Gilles! :o) How are you lately?

I've missed you, Blue Eyed Fish! Please keep writing and keep in touch, willya?

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 3, 2002

hmmm...mourning his soul leaves me half empty

debby

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2002

Lots of misspellings, but I think it would make a good verse. ~E

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 31, 2002

shine on...

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2002

Beautiful write blue-eyed fish...! ;)

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on May 30, 2002

Powerful imagery.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on May 30, 2002

um......sounds soo good , i posted the sister poem to this a little more graphic but um...check it out "Moon Secrets"
this is a great write!!!
Glad i stopped by

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on May 30, 2002

HEY SWEETS
the wine half drunk
is only half savoured
sip slowly, the nectar
ambrosia flavored
til the last drop rests
on moistened lips
entreating the past
to future sips.
big hugs
me

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 30, 2002

Giles a change for you , but I like it...hope your not hurting ..;-)

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on May 30, 2002

Hello! So...you are back drowning in your thoughts? Join the club.)