Will you catch my dream for me with that dream catcher pleeeeeeeeeaaaazzzzze!!!
love Tinka :::))))))
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2002
You have a way with words! hopefully this time my comments will post.
Reviewed by An Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2002
Only dreams can be so vivid. Life is so blurry sometimes. But, if only our dreams weren't vague in meaning, no? Excellent work.... :)
Blessings and light,
~~~Angel
Ah my blue-eyed fish love the "scent of lilac trees - tastes of you" - swim on down to the sunny warm south. Dare to snuggle up with a green-eyed cat?? That would be a daring fish?! HA!
It seems that Gilles is 'dreaming, thinking, reflecting' of summer breezes and the reality it a cold winter night.
Reviewed by Carol (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2001
Gilles:
I feel that you are not
giving your very best.
You wrote "Summer Breeze"
than on another line you
said the opposite.
"Bitter Cold"
That contradicts what
you are writing.
It seems like you are
not understanding what
it is that you are writing!
Other than that it's
a pretty good poem.
Try giving it a little
more thought!
Carol
Deemed One of the Top 10 indie Fantasy releases of 2010 by Fantasy Book Critic, and listed in the first ever Publishers Weekly Indie Select issue, the original 235k word epic title was written in longhand in a Texas prison cell by M. R. Mathias.
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love Tinka :::))))))
Blessings and light,
~~~Angel
Merry Christmas my fish....
Your green-eyed cat
I feel that you are not
giving your very best.
You wrote "Summer Breeze"
than on another line you
said the opposite.
"Bitter Cold"
That contradicts what
you are writing.
It seems like you are
not understanding what
it is that you are writing!
Other than that it's
a pretty good poem.
Try giving it a little
more thought!
Carol
Very nice one here..
LOL . Janet... :0)
Hugs,
Trixie