Mist in the morning, deep over the hill
In distant trees of Old- Time
Whispers that endure
The Magical moments
Of life times before…
-Yes…
Water trickling, in a near by stream
Scent of wild flowers…
And Birds singing…
I take a deep breath…!
And close my eyes…
Takes me back in time…
-Lips…
Are now smiling…
“Dance with me!”
-For I will never forget, this moment…!
-My heart races, to be with only “thee!”
-I wish to only ………
-My eyes have never witness such beauty…
“Please mistress!”
-Would you please dance with me…?
I open my eyes…
-Tears…
Flows down my face…
I gently cup them in my hand…
Hold them near my “heart…!”
With loving embrace…
Distant times of memories…
Tastes, that are so… real…!
I will never, ever forget thee
-For you are the apples…!
-And I am, the peal…
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Reviews of "Fruit of Eden..."
Reviewed by Chris Lindsay (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2002
Thanks for reviewing MERMAID. This is a great poem, rich in sensation and imagery! The irregular rhymes work very well.
If you enjoy being taken to the edge of your seat, yanked sideways, and left spinning through the sky on a speeding wyrm, rejoice. The gripping, white-knuckled conclusion of the Dragon Racers trilogy is here.
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beautiful write, as always.
hugs
ME
Good Write - Mellow and vividly sensual. Smooth Finish.
Happy New Year
Karen Dunn
Wanna be the peel on my apple? Loved that part!! Ready to head south yet??
Green-eyed cat
You've outdone yourself here. This is wonderful! Love, Janet xoxoxo
Very nice one here...
apples and peas... :)
Hugs,
Trixie "Deer"
Sandie Angel :o)