“Stars that have not left yet!”
Surrounding are feelings,
Of a blanket…
“But why dost it call to me?”
“Why are thow dreams taunting?”
-I beg mercifulness to thee…!
-To be curse, of such “wanting!”
-This spell of only from you…
-Why! -Oh why, of mercy of this mortal being!
-My soul…
So many times, I tried to let go of this earth…
And so many times, the haunting stops me…!
-I have come to you by the sea…?
-Please…! “I beg of you!”
-Please… I cry out to…!
-Dost not my heart open!
“Please…”
The moon is full and bright
And the waves, were in motion…
He began to hear “whale songs.”
And wipes the tears, from his eyes…
He notices something in the waves…!
His heart begins to race!
-As he stand!
“He runs, as if it was the last!”
-Oh God! “ He did run…!”
“He reaches and sees, that it was no more
Than an old bottle, made of glass…?”
He decides, to pick it up…
No sooner, there was a smile, on his face…
For there was a beautiful “Red- Rose…”
That was encase…
Gorgeous thoughts and words my fish...
The water agrees with you I see. You always write such beautiful things about the ocean. It must be the fish in ya huh?!
Your green-eyed cat
Reviewed by Audrey Cooper (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2002
Gilles, Wonderful Write
and thank you for your kinds words,
they are appreciated.
Your Poetry Friend, Audrey
Gilles your friends are
not being quite honest with you!
Sorry to say that your poem is not from your heart!
You should consider taking up a course on creative writing!
I think you may benifit a great deal!
BEF,
Enchanting, mysterious, sensual, deep - you are getting so perfect you writing etches pictures while I read my brow crunches with emotion - you can contact the inner thoughts and captivate the poets eye and soul. Love your ability and respect your creativity.
Karen Dunn
The first instalment of The Tales of Bowen unfolds a mesmerizing anthology of narratives intricately woven together by a grand overarching storyline, set against the enchanting backdrop of the mystical realms of Dagonfell.
The water agrees with you I see. You always write such beautiful things about the ocean. It must be the fish in ya huh?!
Your green-eyed cat
and thank you for your kinds words,
they are appreciated.
Your Poetry Friend, Audrey
(stigmata)
not being quite honest with you!
Sorry to say that your poem is not from your heart!
You should consider taking up a course on creative writing!
I think you may benifit a great deal!
Carol
Your friend, Jenni
Enchanting, mysterious, sensual, deep - you are getting so perfect you writing etches pictures while I read my brow crunches with emotion - you can contact the inner thoughts and captivate the poets eye and soul. Love your ability and respect your creativity.
Karen Dunn
Lady Water Dove *~*~*