Tears of Waikiki... (poem) by Gilles G Marchand on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

Very passionate write with deep beauty in it.

Reviewed by author

Reviewed on January 7, 2003

Take sail through the night. Your journey will be a lonely one. The whispering winds will call upon your angels to comfort your loneliness then awake you from your forever dreams and fantasies, bringing you back to reality. You be forever healed and you'll feel the real tears of the world. Your journey is just a dream... Wake up, it's time to move on.

Reviewed by Jo Janoski

Reviewed on March 6, 2002

Beautiful!

Reviewed by J John (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2002

Excellant

Reviewed by J John (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2002

beautiful

Reviewed by Caryn Day-Suarez

Reviewed on March 4, 2002

Beautiful and romantic my birthday fish!! Loved it!!

Your green-eyed-cat

Reviewed by Kathleen M. Kohl (author)

Reviewed on March 3, 2002

Wonderfully written and well read you have a very romantic soul, Gilles. Thankyou for sharing.
Kathy

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on March 3, 2002

Upon the song of the whale - her love - she sends it to you! Very nice. I have a new one called, Tangled up in Gray.

Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 3, 2002

=) Hola Gilles. Lovely write. Miss talking to you. Hope all is going your way. I'll catch you late.

Reviewed by Silvia (Reader)

Reviewed on March 3, 2002

Intriguing and very dreamy.
Bravo!
Thanx for stopping by and reading my stuff.

Silvia

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on March 3, 2002

mystically, hauntingly, beautiful.
as always.
hugs and love
krissy

Reviewed by Darlene Zagata

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

Lovely!

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

wonderful poetry Gilles,always a pleasure to read your work,Charlie

Reviewed by SilverCelticMoon

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

Lovely, I especially liked the last verse, "For the ship will take sail at Midnight!"
Thank you for welcoming me to the Authorsden.
:)

Reviewed by Tiana

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

A beautifully written and heartfelt poem, Gilles.

Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

So beautiful Gilles, love to you & JoJo. Janet & Alan xoxoxo

Reviewed by T Cloth (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

Excellent work!

Reviewed by (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

Nice poem. You must really have strong feelings for this person. There's something magical about Waikiki, you can really feel it in you. When I think of that beautiful place, I always think of my lady. Aloha, Mundo.

Reviewed by (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

as always,your words are beautiful as your thoughts

Reviewed by (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

Beautiful words, Gilles, as always...

Reviewed by Victoria Murray

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

This is really wonderful Gilles.
Victoria

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on March 2, 2002

Hmmmm lovely Gilles....