I love to watch the big cats When they choose their prey Fascinating games they play With stealth their maneuvers Remind me of some males When they decide to stalk They sneak up with wily ways Seduce you with words of praise You become their number one focus On which they practice hokus pokus
Some are gifted with clever snares Magnetism that disperses your fears You will believe anything they say Until you are doing all things their way So enchanted you accept their deceit Easy conquest you're no longer a treat Bored they seek more exciting prey Like bees seeking honey to make their day Some poets like big cats show their intent leaving comments that contain their scent
They are quite entertaining, aren't they? But me, I wouldn't want to be near those teeth (let alone those claws! SHEESH! NOT a good idea! LOL)~ Great stuff, Eileen; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Their breath may have something to do with my not wanting to be around those big cats, bet it's pretty darn stinky! LOL
ENJOYED/LAUGHED WITH THE STYLE, CREATIVITY AND WISOM YOU HAVE CRAFTED THIS POEM I'M SURE MANY REVIEWERS WILL READ THE LAST TWO LINES SEVERAL TIMES TO SEE IF THEY CAN ACCEPT THE TRUTH BURIED INBETWEEN THE LINES
The world's a mighty jungle full of viscious beasts of prey...wary is the the one who recognizes the scent and dodges the fangs of deceit. You are so clever Eileen!
Love, Taylor
So much for lions, but even they have to drop off to sleep. . . and the little mice they terrorized are the only ones who can chew off the net. (smile). This is a neat rant dispelling all toothless cats.
Big cats might be beautiful to observe
From a distance, but one must remember
we are in their food chain
same with smooth talking con men
keep them at a distance, ignoring their line of crap.
enjoyed your write... Eileen
Love & Peace
William
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Shame on them poets..
Amanda is thrilled of all the comments she got
Thanks for yours sweety..
SMooooooooo000000000CH!
Awesome, intuitive, and forecasted droppings. This reminds me so much of my Desert Fox Grid Tarot by Sage card, the Beware, knowing the spiritual dung from the dung to get rid of...the cat's meow, Eileen...
Musk...Yep! I've seen the tell-tale marks of their passion testosterone. I've heard theoir roar amd I've seen the play. If they do have substance then they're usually taken. You and me are on the same page tonight Sis.
love,
Susan
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Intresting, Eileen.Wonderful write..This morning I posted a haiku with a beautiful picture of two glorious lynx..What the Heavenly Father creates is something so powerful and stunningly beautiful..
Thank you--
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Their breath may have something to do with my not wanting to be around those big cats, bet it's pretty darn stinky! LOL
"Like bees seeking honey to make their day" Oooohhh...I like that similitude!
Micke
(btw - I won't believe our Tiger would succumb as did the zebra in pic :o)
Well-penned and very astute!
Many hugs,
CJ
leaving comments that contain their scent
HO HO! Was Big Ed Here??!!
Myrna
I think Victor has hit the nail on the head..hehe
Love
Peter
RM Green
Love, Taylor
blessin's Sis,
cynth'ya
From a distance, but one must remember
we are in their food chain
same with smooth talking con men
keep them at a distance, ignoring their line of crap.
enjoyed your write... Eileen
Love & Peace
William
Amanda is thrilled of all the comments she got
Thanks for yours sweety..
SMooooooooo000000000CH!
You've got that right.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Sage
love,
Susan
Thank you--
Love,
Dove