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A fun one for Earth day!;-)
by E T Waldron → (All Poetry by E T Waldron)
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they lay upon the fertile ground
staring up at moon and stars
his hands caressing breasts unbound
while she speaks about mars
his passions were beginning to soar
while hers were still just warm
his other hand  was making a tour
of places he hoped to charm
she was still talking of earth day
comparing it to mars with no soil
he was intent on having his way
she knew he was ready to boil
she would surprise him with a kiss
knowing soon after they'd be mating
a sudden shower spoiled their bliss
they ran to the car to finish  sating
afterwards he teased about earth day
laughing at the scowl on her face
with the last word  she was happy to say
" no matter what earth's still the best place!"

etw-2008


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 Reviews of "A fun one for Earth day!;-)"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Away is good but at home is best, I hope that in the near future we are not forced to leave here and go to Mars (the fourth rock from the sun)ans start the spoiling thing of ours all over again.
Me optimist?.........naaahhh!

Georg

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Passionate romance and compassion for the earth in one beautiful poem. You masterfully interwove these emotions. A great poem by a great poet. Thanks for sharing this work. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 22, 2008
Contrary to the song, rainy days and Mondays don't have to get us down.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Eileen, I love the light airy feeling to this! Beautiful, romantic...Excellent!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
We would live in the universe if we could?
Love ya!
Ron

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
How romantic...that I'd love to do any day1

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Awww, a wonderful and delightful piece expressing the power of mother nature over all....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
love making in the rain--can't think of much better!-

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
rain or shine a greay earth day celebration

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Being taken to the heavens in love's embrace is an Earth Day ecstasy for any couple. Sis...you say it so well that the softness of the rain is cooling and another read provides the smile of satisfied love....for Earth Day!
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
I guess they were both brought down to earth,,lol,,, Well Done Eileen!!! :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
This poem is really down to earth,
On the very edge of the rating;
Your writing's a pleasure to read,
And definitely worth the waiting!

Well done Eileen. Cute too.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Glad to hear that the shower didn't dampen the ardor. lol I loved the whimsey in this.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Sort of an earthy charm about it all, too bad it rained. Hugs!
Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
I like this one alot and I wish it you and me laying on the ground together...Rufuz (lol)

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Oh you certainly have been bitten by the spring bug. Beautiful and romantic write Eileen, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on April 21, 2008
O, you tempting, teasing li'l minx, ET :o). Rain or not, someone celebrated Earth Day blissfully! Poetic words beyond delightful...
Love and Blessings ~~ Micke

Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Wow, Eileen! This is beautiful yet sensual! Very well penned; happy Earth Day to you! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
I love the webbing of sensual thoughts
and the beauty of Earth poem
And I truly agreed with your
Closing stanza Earth is the best place!!
Peace Love and Hugessss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
very nice... I think I prefer earth too

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Excellent writing sweet lady..have a wonderful and safe day...HUgsss

Reviewed on April 21, 2008
This is au natural celebration of Earth Day, Eileen, delightful!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2008
Fine expression of earth day, Eileen!...


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