what do i need? (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 6, 2011

Great one Eileen,ha ha ha....you are funny...loved this line best: 'all my electrons
are kafooey'
Love from Kay

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 7, 2011

Naughty you..love this...(giggles)..you go girl...stay safe and well sweet lady...Hugss

Reviewed on February 6, 2011

I get a charge out of this one. So good to see your energy and humor back.

Last time I checked, my batteries were up. Would love to give you a boost.

Ron

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2011

Delightful naughty poem..love it!!

Hope all is well with you dearest friend..

Blessings,

vesna :)

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on February 6, 2011

This poem is so cute! Love it! God Bless! ~Chessly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

clever!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

Wow - can one find an electrician with an erection, in the yellow pages??!!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

I think all you need is a new battery for your inertia thrusting device. Never rely on a electrician's erection, they're always short circuited. Patrick

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Hang the electrician, Eileen. You light up my day.
One thing you don't need is a happy sense of fun.
-gene.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

Eileen...have you blown a fuse? The inertia in the thrusting is capable of arcing and sparking enough friction to start those fires going. Crafted workings in this one.
Amor

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

LOL...ET is that you???? too funny!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 4, 2011

LOL, I bet it's the second suggestion, Naughty Girl you don't sound at all run down!!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

Haha, E,your ending got me, wishing revenge, but ending with understanding...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

oooooooh my goodness , Eileen , lol !
Love, Mary

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

Hahahahaha?! Getting it up for Eileen . . . Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

high voltage writing! Morgan

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

A whimsical artistic beauty!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

Great, just great, Eileen,
exactly what i need this morning, a lift
and such a clever sustained lift at that.
Luv it!

John

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

Love the lighthearted tone to this serious write

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

You sound like you know what you are doing, Eileen. This writing speaks of knowledge.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

A meaningful metaphorical sharing, Eileen. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

Sounds like you are enough of an electrician in your own right...or one of those Geek Squad types from Best Buy...next time I need work on anything electrical, I'm calling you...e

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

drink lots of water with pinches of sea salt...perfect conductor!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 3, 2011

My- shocking.
You seem wired pretty fine.
:)

John