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Room Mates
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Room Mates


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The girl loves the flat
But hates her room mate
On the sofa she sat
Every night until very late

She couldn't sleep at all
The lodger was very annoying
There is no one she can call
Nothing she could do not a thing

Enough is enough or the shit will hit the fan
To get out of the house is now the main plan
Started packing put all her stuff in the van
She's leaving her room mate can find a man

It was super calming alone in the van
She could drive away nobody's fool
No lodger no trouble no pestering man
Free as a bird on the road so cool

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 Reviews of "Room Mates"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 9, 2007
We all need me time, and to feel free! From the looks of the picture, she left just in time...You've penned it well!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on May 8, 2007
You really captured the crisis in this ongoing story. Enjoyed this poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 8, 2007
Sometimes I think we all need to feel free as a bird - if even for only a short time.


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