Trick Or Treat (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 22, 2011

Psst, stuff the peeing, lets just play under the sheets, trick and treating with a raw hide that is cute 'neath the sheets.

Reviewed by Dr. Dorothy Holtslander

Reviewed on October 22, 2011

This brought a big smile to my face!! Thanks
Dorothy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 19, 2011

I thought for a minute they were collecting for the poor from the local convent! "How do you solve a problem like a Pee-er?!" You know I LOVE Halloween, Belle! LOL... But I like this version best... I can cope with these cutie ones!! xxx

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 19, 2011

LOL...creative, clever and very enjoyable.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on October 18, 2011

A real Treat you give!
~La Belle~
with the cuteness thereof!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 18, 2011

I'm not much for the kiddie 'ween. Your last line is more my style. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 17, 2011

Belle, you've hit another homer my dear friend -- it's a hoot and I love it -- I bid you joy love and peace -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on October 17, 2011

Cute poem Dear Friend.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 17, 2011

Belle,
Love it!

John

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 17, 2011

Give us something good,
or we’ll pee on your feet

And be careful, some of them will Poop and Barf, too!!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 17, 2011

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Unforgettable! This is the kind of humor I love. You made me laugh out loud with that last line!

Connie

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Very cute and so appropriate..Love the photo and the ending of this charming poem.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Cute one La Belle, Happy Halloween.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Absolutely adorable comic reflection!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Little ghouls are darling.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Cute is right...love it.
fee

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Belle, Very original and cute. I love the picture!

Always,
dEBORAH

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

Ha ha i love it
this poem its truly unique and fun
La Belle open the door its me Yolie
Trick Or Treat Lol its a fantastic write!
Happy Halloween

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

lol. love it. Liz

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on October 16, 2011

A delightful write well done indeed as that last line was hilarious great poetry as always Laura