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Candles
by Carol J Ekins → (All Poetry by Carol J Ekins)
Tuesday, October 18, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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humorous old age

When you have so many candles upon your birthday cake

Does the act of blowing all of them out

Make you gasp for air and shake?

When you cannot even count that high

cuz your brain is getting dim

Come on, now don't be silly

Is that frosting on your chin?

Don't worry; we won't notice

How messy you've become

We'd lak toove died how funny

You look at a hundred and one


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 Reviews of "Candles"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 20, 2016
Be careful or you'll singe your bushy eyebrows if you don't get those all out in one blow!

I especially like the second to last line. Like the line my uncle used when he was 101, "Nurse, get me a bucket! I want to kick it!"

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on October 18, 2016
A lighthearted look at the age old problem....
Aging...
and we are all getting there...!
Healthy older age is the goal...
Diana...


Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 18, 2016
I'm seventy-seven and I am as fit and hearty as I was . . . er . . . at seventy-six.

Reviewed on October 18, 2016
This is a healthy way to look at what age can do. I'm a Caregiver and no spring chicken myself!! LOL!! 'Enjoyed!

Love ya!

Jane


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