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same old, same old
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Another angry write.

don't speak of love to me
when hate and evil comes out of your mouth

don't speak of peace to me
when you engage in wars from north to south

don't speak of poverty
when you reach into my pocket and steal

don't speak freedom to me
when my rights have been ignored and repealed

don't speak of God to me
when you do not live the life that you preach

don't speak of poetry
when i can't find the beauty that you teach

don't speak--don't say a word
'til you have something worthwhile to say

what comes out is absurd
the same lies...same bullshit...different day

**do the world a favor...and just SHUT UP!!!!**

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "same old, same old"
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2004
excellent write Karla. I do wonder if you had your dear old President in mind when you wrote this !!

Reviewed on March 14, 2004
OK Karla, i wish i could but it's so much fun doing this. To me it's not hate, love, or preaching. It's just the way I write for fun, pleasure etc. I do like to say something when i write but if i don't it still serves its purpose. Anyway your poem certainly made me want to shut my big mouth and go south. haha G

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
Oh the wrath that flows out of one's self when their soul is heavy with emotion.
I hope the purging helped.
Your voice was heard and has given all something to think about.

Hugzz my dear,
Dee

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
emotionally charged!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
Awwwww someone ticked you off!!

Excellent write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on March 14, 2004
(((((Karla))))
All I have to say to this write is Amen Preach on...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Very nice.

Reviewed on March 13, 2004
You have releived yourself from the burden of unpleasant feelings. That is everybody's right. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
I guess you may be not to keen on him:)) a kinda great juxtapostion, love the form..

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
It's good to get the anger out. There is much wisdom in this also.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
karla you rant it helps and you write it inspires this is excellent.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Excellent Karla! I know where to come when I need a good retort write!;-)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
AMEN!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Great release of anger and frustration!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Who got into your face today, Karla? But I agree with them all, especially, "don't speak of God to me
"when you do not live the life that you preach."

I really doubt I have to this day ever met anyone that really, I mean REALLY practices all of what they preach...Peace thru Faith, ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
I wish you could run this as a political campaign commercial, instead of us having to listen to all the BS all these candidates continue to spout about how they will fix everything - and nothing ever gets fixed.

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
.#$%&* I love it when you swear! Very nice...I get tired of hearing the blathering and poppycock of the Gov. too.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Yep...I agree with you whole heartedly Karla...
If you cant saY something good..dont say
anything at all...fantastic writing..floria

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
WoW And Powerful karla..
"Who you talken bout?"
Great rant. Hope you feel better
and whomever leaves you alone.
Lurve ya............Ron

Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Ouch...powerful rant. Excellent!

Reviewed on March 13, 2004
(((Karla)))

Emotionally charged, thought-provoking, needed rant! Many people can identify with your anger!

Excellent write

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
Karla, quite an emotional rant. And I know you have much justification for it. But dear there are those who do not act that way toward you or do these things. Just do your best to shut out the dirt that is all around you. There is much good if you can see it. Love and hugs Bill Murray xoxoxox


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