unbroken (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

Absolutely right Karla. No need to suffer in silence. A great voice of conscience and wisdom

Reviewed on March 24, 2004

When enough is enough the vanguished will free themselves. Great write Karla. < < < < < < < < <HUGS>>>>Mikii

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

When Your Will Is Broken You Might As Well Put Gun In Your Mouth Put Yourself Outa Your Misery_

Credit For Write Thing!

TRASK

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

I agree Karla...but sometimes it can be
very difficult when children are involved..
this was so touching...beautiful write..floria

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

Karla, this beautiful write and excellent advice. I don't know which is harder to get away from, the abusive person or to get away from the scars that's left on one's spirit. It can be done, if you know God loves you and He wants you to have the best.

Love, Patty

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

((((Karla))))
A wonderful write, keep it up...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Great write Karla!!

Thanks for sharing....needed to read this eye-opener!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Great write on abuse Karla, I hope it helps others.

Nancy

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Karla,
Great lines with a powerful meaning!
Beautifully penned!

Hugs and love,
Sheila

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Well said.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Wonderful write. Wonderful freedom.

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Very Good Karla -- love the form! Vicky

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Good for you! I've seen too many women stay in abusive relationships. They don't want to waste the time invested in them. They can still change their men. They can take it a little more each time. So many excuses for why they shouldn't leave, so few for why they stay.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

At first I thought of that old Carter family hymn, May the Circle Go Unbroken, but now I see it is your fight to break free--Go Girl!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Karla, a brilliant write my friend! Freedom is so precious no one should allow themselves to be subjugated to another. You point out such an important position! Brava!Superb poetry!

Reviewed by Tonya I

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Very good and very well expressed. Abusive relationships are definitely not worth the pain. Love shouldn't hurt like that. xxx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Powerful write that packs quite an emotional-filled wallop; and such a good message in this write! Very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

No greater message than Salvation...
This is so true Karla it is not always
easy but it is healthier....

Peg