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pick up sticks
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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like a sudden, devastating storm, divorce destroys lives as well.



i enter the silence of the room
darkness lining the walls
sadness echoing
in the chambers of my broken heart
as i see the reminders
of our lives
scattered here and there on the floor

i fall to my knees in abject pain
how could this have happened
so unexpected
this tornado ripped my world apart
as i see the reminders
of our lives
shattered in pieces on the floor

and i start to pick up the pieces
deciding what to keep
what to throw away
my tears wet the mountains of debris
as i see the reminders
of our lives
lying in ruins on the floor

a piece of paper catches my eye
it's a poem you wrote
when we were in love
and now your words mean nothing to me
i pick up the reminders
of our lives
and throw them in the trash

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "pick up sticks"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on May 20, 2004
Very emotional!
Sad too.
Excellent poem!

Reviewed on May 19, 2004
great comparing this with the worse storm and how it does makes everything look like little sticks when it leaves but always leaves something untouched as the poem was that object..
Very nice
Tommy

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
sad poem
but wonderfully written

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Very sad but honest write of love dissipated in the ever-changing winds of disappointment and neglect. Beautifully done, Karla.
You are so precious.
Amor

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Great emotion, karla!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Extremely heartwrenching write, Karla.

Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Karla
Heartfelt very well done...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Excellent_

You Can Never Pick Up Pieces,i.e Only Can You Do Make Best Of What You Got Left!!

TRASK

Reviewed on May 19, 2004
(((Karla)))

Love how you compared this to a tornado; interesting anologies in this powerful, heartbreaking poem! Very well done; BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :(


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