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I Did Not See It Coming
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I did not see it coming
That sudden lightning bolt,
That's how fast love struck me
With a million, zillion volts,

By your eyes I'm hypnotized,
By your looks mesmerized,
I can't move, I'm paralyzed,
My heart's been burglerized,

I did not see it coming
That sudden lightning bolt,
That's how fast it fell apart
Love destroyed by the jolt,

I am left to analyze,
No answers to the whys,
The magic's gone--vaporized,
I ponder love's demise...

I did not see it coming.

(C) Copy written, July 14, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Well done, Karla!

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Wow Karla you are an amazing poet,I think you should really see about getting these published I will help you in anyway I can
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Great write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
great write Karla. rhyme works well here. Dawn

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
I can see how both happened very quickly. It had to be physical attraction. Real love by both people survives the good and bad. It's usually the one who loves that's hurt, and you express that empty feeling very well. It's a lost one should be thankful for having. It would have been hell being around such a person.

Love,
Patty

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Karla I really love the flow and rhyme of this one. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
karla,
This is exactly how it hit me too but your words give it a little more descriptive meaning. I also love your choice for a visual. You "DONE GOOD!!!!!!"
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Karla, great metaphor! You know how love strikes! No wonder we get knocked out by it huh?;-)Electrifying poem!

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
(((Karla)))

You have been struck by lightning's muse; outstanding write! You do these lightning or stormy writes so well; keep them coming, Storm Goddess!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Karla this is outstanding.... The Rhyme and voice is excellent in this piece....

Hugs prayers lady Peg

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
awesome write, very well done

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
I agree with Sue; we rarely, if ever, see it coming. And it does 'zap' very very hard.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
nor do we ever it seems karla, i wonder why


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