We Were Happy, Once (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Wow, this fits my romantic mood well, I have been thinking about a young man I care deeply about and this, well this was perfect
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 7, 2004

Wow! You are getting good at romantic
poetry Karla! Excellent poem!
Becca

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 4, 2004

Beautiful work Karla!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2004

This is beautifully and skillfully penned, but so sad

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 4, 2004

Lovely work, Karla. Sad, but take comfort in the knowledge that the sun rises every day, and so there's a chance for a new smile.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 4, 2004

So lovely and deeply touching Karla,

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2004

Karla this is so beautiful and deeply emotive. Lovely poem.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

great images! deeply moving ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Perfection the lead in and ending. Fantastic write and example of how a relationship can change.

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

very well written Karla, bravo on this one!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

A sad write for a Sunday, Karla, but nonetheless as always, a quite well put one...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

I was happy once too. This poem reminds me of that beau. Well done, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Sad, yet wonderful write.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Powerful expression. Love it!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

fantastic imagery, great poem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Superb poem Karla! apocalyptic love event...Not easy to forget!;-)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

You Still Can Be Happy Alone If You Ever Find Your Own True Self!

TRASK

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Agree with Sherry below...resilence and flexibility are the key assets we need to survive the dissapointments of life..Karen
You put it so well....

Love and best wishes...
Peter

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

And the heavens and Earth trembled from our betrayal?

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Tragic, indeed, but a most powerful poem, Karla. And what a picture that is.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

I thought we still were..

Bloody tragic qwrite special K

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

(((Karla)))

WOW, this write is simply breathtaking! What imagery; the ending in particular, blew me away! BRAVA on a job well done; excellent write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

I would hate to hear the Northern Lights splinter...boy, what a noise THAT would make! YIKES! LOL

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

The one great thing about life is there's always another day, another way, and always hope