~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tell no man That I am a Poet, For fear They will snap my pen in two And convince me That I had nothing important to say: Tell no man.
Tell no man That I've fallen in love, For fear that They will inject my heart WIth raw hatred For anything lovely and meaningful: Tell no man.
Tell no man That I believe in God, For fear that They will exorcise Him Out of my soul So I'll become like the other puppets: Tell no man.
Tell no man That I'm against the war, For fear They'll say I am a traitor To our Nation And tell me that I don't support our troops: Tell no man.
Tell no man That I enjoy music, For fear They'll make me live in silence Deafened to songs That once enticed my clumsy feet to dance: Tell no man.
Tell no man That I have fear of death, For fear that They'll use it against me Being tube fed While making laws and defying God: Tell no man.
Tell no man That I have bad habits, For fear They will poison me with lies And deny me The right to have some enjoyment from life: Tell no man.
Tell no man That I am a Poet, For fear They will snap my pen in two And convince me That I had nothing important to say: Tell no man.
Tell no man.
(C) Copy written, 22 November, 2004/Revised, 22 March, 2005, by Karla Dorman. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I agree with many of the others - one of your best, Karla - written from your poetic heart and soul. And I truly hope Big Brother never takes anything away from you, or from anyone.
This SHRIEKS off the page, Karla, and its message needs to be heard by EVERYONE!! This is a stunning write - one of your best, I think, and am keeping for sure. It's form and content really bring the subject matter home... I am so glad to have given up my other reading to come across this tonight. Bless you - NEVER not write... I'll tell someone if you do! :)) LOL Kate xx
Oh sis, this so profound a message. If only others who cannot see with open eyes, can have your vision. This is so wonderfully written, by a very wonderful lady that I am proud to call sister. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((((((((VERY SPECIAL AND MANY HUGS)))))))))))))))))))))))), your big little sis, Barbie
Hugs, Carole
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Love this!
~ Mari
God Bless
Michelle!
Love Tinka
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Excellent message in this write; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D