These came to me so strong, so strong...always remember, never forget.
KATRINA, ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY: TWO POEMS (c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
"9th Ward"
look beneath the make-up that's been slapp'd on my face. can't you see i'm hurtin' under the false veneer? lies eyeshadow'd mascara'd lipstick'd, spray'd with perfume can't hide the stench of death. it pervades ruin'd streets & lingers in my eyes... poor elderly disabl'd are the forgotten souls THEY don't want you to see - behind the rouge'd cheeks the problems still exist. fake beauty can't be pass'd off as reality - black/ white-face'd hope ain't nothin' but dreams that blew apart and complicate the pain. ><><><><><><><><><><><><>< "I Hear It"
i hear it from the safety of the bed, the ratt'lin' rumble of the superdome roof comin' apart - i see chunks of it bein' pried off one. section. at. a. time, the fingers of katrina reach inside, and that's when i wake up from the nightmare. i hear them, the screams of desperation, and see it in wide-open'd mouths yellin' for relief, anger builds to cat 5 strength, boils over the shelter design'd to hold back the surge, and its pull threatens to suck me right in, and that's when i wake up from the nightmare. i hear it, the lies that they are tellin', ev'rything's fine, come back to the city, partee time, ev'rything's back to normal, N'Awlins might been beat down, but she's okay, she's risin' and she's better than before...... and i know i'm still havin' a nightmare.
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Reviews of "Katrina, One Year Anniversary: Two Poems"
Karla,
I my three years on AD I not sure if I have ever commented on your work.
I enjoy the imagery. Your pen takes you there and helps the reader to understand more about you.
Loved it!
Antoinette
Very powerful rendering of the horrific events of the worst storm our nation has ever seen. From the perspective of peoples plights it is a worst nightmare imaginable, but from perspective of how bad the storm and devastation was it is beyond even understanding how anyone survived. We forget that it was even worse than 9/11. Great work Karla!
Karla, you have such an uncanny way of pulling the reader into the literal heartbeat of what you write!
My heart pounded as I was reading...and remembering.
Let us never forget our people's plight.....or past horror.
God bless you for these, Karla
Love&Hugs, Rhonda
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2006
These bring to life: The hell people went through. The hell they are still living in.
Very well told, gutrending indeed. It seems from here, UK, that many people have been forgotten, swept under the political carpet..
I read these while I watched the coverage of the anniversary on WWL-TV.. so many images I had not seen until today. It brings the tragedy that was Katrina into new light...
Your pen speaks with great compassion and through the eyes of someone who paid a while lot of attention to what happened. Your heart is as big as Texas my dear.
Love,
Susan
When nightmares come to fruition, that is when they are most fearful, you are scarin' me and old Ruffie again, stormspinner...but like those in New Orleans, we will survive and we will go on...Hope you and they find Peace, Ed & Rufuz
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I my three years on AD I not sure if I have ever commented on your work.
I enjoy the imagery. Your pen takes you there and helps the reader to understand more about you.
Loved it!
Antoinette
GOd Bless
Michelle~
Eileen
My heart pounded as I was reading...and remembering.
Let us never forget our people's plight.....or past horror.
God bless you for these, Karla
Love&Hugs, Rhonda
Very well told, gutrending indeed. It seems from here, UK, that many people have been forgotten, swept under the political carpet..
Myrna
Love,
Susan
Hope this will never happen again!!
Love Tinka
Fee
Two very excellent poems to honur the anniversary of this catastrophic event, written as though you were there.
Love, Joy & Peace,
Joseph
the screams of desperation,
and see it
in wide-open'd mouths yellin'
for relief,
I can still see and hear them, and may this never happen again - to anyone.
Most powerful, Karla.
A ghastly and nightmarish scenario on the anniversary of that monster Katrina
Lest we forget..
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
We will always remember and never forget! God bless our Gulf Coast states; may they return to their former glory days!