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Mom
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I miss you, Mom.

when i was five, stuck fast to
the bed with nightmares, i screamed
for Mom.  stomping up the stairs,
larger than fear itself (at
least in my mind), she came and
unbuckled me into her
lap.  i knew i was safe, then.

when i had a bad day at
school, i could count on her to
make things right.  no bullies could
reach around her to get to
me.  there, in her arms, i was
loved and protected, and life
would be better tomorrow.

                                            she died sixteen years ago.

and here i am, a child in
an adult's body, still scared
of the dark, rolled around by
sudden storms, a ship that has
lost its anchor.  i feel lost
and alone in the world...how
could she have left me this way?

i miss Mom's presence in my
life; how i wish i could run
to the comfort that she gave:
nothing could harm me as long
as she was near, an angel,
my provider, God in the
form of what love was:  my Mom.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Mom"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 16, 2006
Nice write Karla
Memories od mom or dad are treasures
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
could feel that bond that is forever, Karla. keep it close. very beautiful poem. Dawn

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Mom's are so important and your prose is so inspiring. So sad when they leave us when we are young. God bless you and thank you for sharing your gift. My best, Gloria

Reviewed on September 15, 2006
your mom sounds like she was alot like my Mom, she is my resting place, as was Nonna when she was alive, this is beautiful absolutely beautiful
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
A lovely and riveting tribute to your mother, Karla...I miss mine too very much! Hugs, Myrna

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
what a lovely poem, Karla...you were so very, very, very blessed! I'm sorry that she's no longer with you, but I'm glad that you are blessed with such powerful memories.

Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Lovely tribute to your mom Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
I am pleased to say that this was truly beautiful, I am so in touch with my mother we are insepretable!!! I could relate....

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
I'm sure she's still protecting you from heaven. Victor

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Moms are the miracle workers and makers in this world. With their magic all things paled to her karma. I miss my dad as much as you miss your mom. My mom is stull around making her magic.
love,
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Beautiful tribute to your mother Karla! There is no bond like that of a mother, and when they leave us no matter when it is, there is a deep empty place within that can never be filled.Well done !

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
This is so beautiful, Karla. Our mothers are who shape us throughout our lives to be the person we are as adults -- I miss mine terribly. By the way you write, I can tell there is much of your mother in you (smiles). Again, a beautiful poem and the tender feelings gave me chills. Thank God for our memories!
Many hugs,
CJ

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
And she is still with you and always will be...ed

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Karla

I concur completely with Karen below
There is no love like a Mother's love
Very touching
God Bless

Peter

Reviewed on September 15, 2006
Karla,

Truly beautiful memoir to our mother; God rest her soul! She was certainly one of a kind, and she will be forever missed! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
an angel,
my provider, God in the
form of what love was: my Mom.

And you've written a truly wonderful heartfelt ode to her, Karla.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 15, 2006
There is not another person in this world who can take the place of our mothers. There is a certain security that we feel from her and we never get that feeling again from anyone else in our lifetimes. I am sure that you do miss you mom, especially in moments of fear when we recall that as a unable, unable to defend ourself, she was always there to protect us and quiet our fears. Your emotions are tangible in this fine poem, Karla and you have written words that each of us knows to be so true.
Take care,
Sherry


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