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Love Is.n't Supposed to Hurt Like This
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Stop the violence.


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'Love Is.n't Supposed to Hurt Like This'

...your {dark} whhiiissssppppper
lifts the hair on the back of the neck:
chilled fingers
slap their way all the way down to the bone.
i feel your tongue strum
the frets of my spine, >>twanging<< each nerve
until they huuuummmmmmmm your song of pain:
love is.n't supposed to hurt like this ...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (8/30)

 

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 Reviews of "Love Is.n't Supposed to Hurt Like This"
Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
A powerful and wonderful write, Sweet One! LOVE YA! SC

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
Very dark and intense offering...one that I can relate to today...yip been a baddy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 2, 2007
DArk, intense and sad and TRUE for some!
GREAT write Karla!
It needs to sTOP!
Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 2, 2007
Sometimes we unwisely chosse love like as whe choose to sit on a chair with a thumbtack point waiting for our arse.
Georg

Reviewed on September 1, 2007
We need to stop domestic violence and all violence
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Darkly intense and yet powerfully true.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
A well penned reflection of darkness lurking.

Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Dark and brooding as the evil that lurks beneath the smile of most abusers...time for change...

Fee

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
WOW! Great write!!!
Annie Lacy

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
A different write for you my friend, but you've expressed it well...you are right, love isn't supposed to hurt...love should be gentle and filled with compassion for our mate...a powerful write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
You have expressed deep feelings in such a vivid picture of words.

Larry

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Very true Karla, this is not love! Holly

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Love doesn't hurt like that!

Violence in any relationship is the output of sick minds that cause hurt in the name of love. It is so easy to confuse "sick" love with "caring" love when fulfillment of needs are strongly sought and any attention at all gained from the abuser is disguised as love.

Stopping the abuse has to begin at home where the abuser is taught to abuse.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
It surely isn't, although I think it does, for far too many.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Ah, but that isn't love, then, is it Karla. Good.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Your lines identify the truth that love isn't pain. True love never allows abuse. A man who physically abuses his woman isn't a real man.

Reviewed on August 31, 2007
Any man or woman who verbally/physically abuses their loved ones, their partners, their mates is lower than a snake's belly. Chillingly effective poetry that wraps its fingers around the heart and gives it a painful squeeze. You may have saved lives today with this hardhitting piece today. Thank you! Very well done, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

And that pic--W O W!!!!

Reviewed on August 31, 2007
You are right dear sister. Love shouldn't hurt but unfortunately it hurts.


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