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Gonna Feel That In The Morning
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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A memoir to the ease of youthful movement, long gone ...


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This getting up harder the
older I get.  Old bones crack-creak-
crack their way out of bed,

muscles used to sleep refuse to move
as easily as I want them to.
Didn't help that I fell yesterday - was

right:  gonna feel that in the
morning.  And I am.  This getting up
harder the older I get ......

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (10/28)


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 Reviews of "Gonna Feel That In The Morning"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
Welcome to the true world of Geriatric pain Karla
It's a reality
we all feel that way, one day or another
thanks for sharing
Peace & love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
..."old bones crack-creek-crack their way out of bed"....now I will join in on the chorus as my older bones click into place...good one Karla one I feel more and more and the colder weather moves in
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Old bones crack-creak-
crack their way out of bed,

Mine even play a tune these days! Ain't it Grand, Gettin Old?

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Judging by the picture, you are a heck of a cuddly little kitten!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
don't i know it
(even if i say i'm young forever)
wish my body agreed
Love the pic!!!!

Reviewed on October 28, 2007
I am afraid I already feel that, I can relate, but we pray and we get through the best we can
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
I'm still a ways away from feeling like that, Karla. But it comes to all of us in its own time. Hope you're feeling better.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
"getting it up hareder the older I get" Hey that sounds like my line oops sorry being naughty again....lol I know what you mean and I agree.

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Yip spot on!!

Happy Halloween !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
I have to agree with you Karla; everyday a new challenge. As some very wise person said, "Getting older is not for sissys."
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
You have my kitty cat picture, ir ia hanging in my hallway! I'll take the life of the kitty, always agile. Sorry you fell, hope you are okay....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Cute pic! Nice poem think young. :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Ya think? Well done Karla.

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
When I got up from my meal at noon the old left hip caused me to squirm. Then I come and read this. Wow.

Larry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Ah the life of a little kitten was not meant for us.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Karla, it's like I told a social worker the other day, "getting older ain't for chickens" then she booted me out of her office.

Nice write, cute picture, for a cat,
Dan

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
A cute and humorous poem. I bet that little kitty has a time getting out of all that twine or rope. I think my bones might crack and creak too in his place.

Reviewed on October 28, 2007
a vivid description of the phenomena of ageing. If I were able to do it I would stop the genetic clock so as to stay young all the time. Brilliant write

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Yeah, but when the mind starts crack-creak-crackin'....--Charlie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
The way to combat it Karla is to think young, and let those thoughts turn to dreams that can put you in a good mood;-) You write it so well,I sure can relate...

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
This getting up
harder the older I get ......

Hey you....that's my line:=)

Walt

Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Karla~

Twinkletoes!! LOL Sorry about the fall; glad you weren't hurt! It could have very easily been a lot worse. Just be careful and hope that your pain/discomfort goes away soon! Nice to laugh about our misfortunes from time to time; makes the pain much easier to bear, ya know?? Wonderful write; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

At least I wasn't with you; I would have busted a gut laughing! LOL You know me....*grins*

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Look at Jerry's review. Funny how we all can indentify at times.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
hope you are oay after your fall-i sure know what you mean-i ounded fence posts yesterday-sure felt that this AM

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
You preaching to the choir heah . . .

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Boy, am I with you on this one...its almost worth not going to bed!
Hope your feeling "looser" tomorrow! LOL!
Great pen!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
I feel like this too Karla! Please don't fall again!
Love,
annie


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