It Takes Two (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 5, 2007

Powerful and true words here, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Dayumed straight it does! One sided is a selfish sided engagement and engagement means to engage another, One sided just doesn't fit if other's are honest.
Much wisdom here Karla!
love and blessings,
Susan

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

I love "The hurl of words under your fist...." The poem starts strong and ends very pointedly. Sorry, Charlie, you're outa luck--outa love -- and outa here! --Charlie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

So very true but assault charges should be filed as well, nobody should be able to get away with this behaviour for although the subject had the strength and wisdom to walk away...the next poor sould may not.

Fee

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Marvelous write. Thanks dear karla

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

It surely does.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Two people cause the most misery on earth . . . Good'n . . .

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

You are so right! It does take two people to make a relationship work--and only one to destroy it. Your poem makes a good point.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

A coin can't have just one side.
Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

Very well said Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

stirring with emotion! well said

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

It is truly sad when you give your all, and it still falls apart. I hope you stick to 'your guns' unless you get positive proof of a change in character - like months of counseling or whatever you need to know that change is not momentary - if it's a relationship you'd like to have [if things were different]. Did I make any sense? Gosh, I hope so.

Kathy

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

This is great, Karla.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

SO TRUE WHAT ELSE CAN I ADD?
PEACE BE WITH YOU
AN EXCELLENT WRITE
PEACE & LOVE BE WITH YOU

William

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

It takes two,, and not 50-50 but 100-100
Nice one,,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

This is powerful and so true, Karla. It takes two to make a relationship work; an excellent potentially life-saving poem! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

T and R are both in my prayers; I hope they can work out their differences.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

You are so right. True words ring through this poem from your heart. great write. Liz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

Yeah baby it sure does, let me take yer to the local flea pit and I'll show yer how it works, Anglo style....lol

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

Words that speak true, great write for those who tried and lost a relationship that meant a lot to them and not the other.