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Something Wrong
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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the ones that need it
economic stimulus
do not qualify

the homeless, the poor
Veterans and disabled -
there is something wrong

food would have been nice
and a few necessities
they don't think of US

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/12)

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
"And so it goes..."

- Billy Joel

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
Interesting commentary, Karla, although I have to admit I don't know a lot about who is not getting the stimulus. This, and some of the comments below, stimulate me to proclaim one of my own wishes. That would be that congressmen and all the rest of government's retirees would be a part of the social security system for their pensions. They would be in the same system with the rest of us...Jerry

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
I am still trying to figure our stimulus check out... nothing makes sense anymore...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Isn't this the truth. I know, believe me, I know.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Well written Karla. Being a veteran who was disabled in the line of duty myself in 2004, I understand where you're coming from. But in all fairness, I must be missing something here. I get my disability check every month which barely covers our mortgage. My wife works two jobs to pay the rest of the bills and provide food and clothing for our eight year old son Jon. Because she works, we filed an income tax return in 2007, a simple requirement in order to receive the stimulus payment. Every person or family in the country who filed a tax return in 2007 is getting a stimulus check of some type. Now you know me; I've written some pretty harsh things about our leaders and I am not in love with our government at present; corruption is rampant; prices are out of control; the greed is disgusting and the country as a whole is Godless. But anyone and everyone who is a citizen can file a simple 1040 EZ and get a stimulus payment. I agree, the rich get richer and the poor are getting poorer and it's a sad state of affairs. But I have to give my support to the economic stimulus act. It's not much but it's better than doing nothing at all. Let's face reality, we wouldn't be in the economic mess we're in if people would stop and read the labels of what they're buying. Our economy would be fine if REAL AMERICANS would BUY AMERICAN. I don't think I've ever disagreed with you on anything before this Karla. Oh well, always a first time I guess. God bless you my friend.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
$154 billion dollars borrowed from China for the economic stimulus package! It must be paid back with interest. Do you have any idea who will have to pay this back? We, the American taxpayers. I fail to see the stimulus! JMW

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
k.j. just think of that flood of greenbacks that will be trickling down to you from this injection of capital ...

so says the theory but the theory does not to work [or, is not allowed to work.]

The American Revolution aint over yet ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Something very wrong, indeed.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
In the US, the Washington boys are saying to themselves, are no poors or needy, so we can put all our money in Iraq so we can get tentimes it back in cheap oil that we can sell to our landsmen for ten times what we paid for it.
"Isn't the American way beautiful?"

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Powerful writing, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
A country supposedly full of wealth, yet those who need most are left behind, passionately written....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Very sad but true

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Well written sweet lady,enjoyed..stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
I know people had to earn a certain amount in order to get it. I don't think that is fair. Our goverment should stop spending billions in Iraq and help those who need it here in America......M

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
...you write the words of wrong here Karla...in ink unnoticed by many...who could do something about it...choosing not to.
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Yes Karla I agree there is something terribly wrong. Thank you for sharing reality.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Great expression of striking thoughts
of a sad reality.

Axilea

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Karla, this is so sad but it is totally true...those who need, never get! Thanks for calling our attention to something that is so unfair.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Sad but true reality of life. We do not matter except as a vote and I wonder even how much that matters anymore.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Yes there is something very wrong, everything is backwards. Well written!

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Yes, sad that those that need it are ofttimes bypassed, but this "stimulus" was tied into IRS tax-payers. I would hope that more of the needy would qualify for the Mission Food-Basket.
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Indeed. . . the rich get richer. Something is very wrong. Time for CHANGE. I like the way you have shaped this poem, Karla. Eileen

Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Something sure IS wrong HERE!! Heartbreaking reality for far too many (including US). People don't give a **** anymore!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Yes my friend there is, something really big is wrong. And no one seems to know how to fix it. Love and best wishes, Bonnie


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