K aleidoscope: a constantly changing set of colors, A ccording to the American Heritage Dictionary. In
R eality, it reflects the many moods of me changing L ike mercury. They shine through bits of broken glass, A ll these words I've penned, to shatter into pieces ---
J ust like my life. Dreams thrown into piles of failure, E verything I'd worked for gone in a mad.rush of wind, A nd yet, I hope. Hope for better days, when I don't N eed to worry where my next meal is coming from, or
D on't have to depend on others to prove my worth --- O h, but would that day come soon. Until then, I R ebuild my house upon the foundation of prayer --- M y God will get me through come Hell or high water. A nd so, I write, looking to the One Who gave me these N eeded words to spark hope like rainbows after a storm.
(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (5/20)
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Reviews of "Acronym of ... Me (For Bear Paw's Challenge)"
Karla, how beautifully said. The sadness of the past, the hope of the future. Your words give me the feeling of knowing you, of actually knowing you and I know I am the better for it.
Thank you... Mark
Great poem here, I loved this, you have the same middle name as my Mom Carol Jean and Karla Jean LOL, a great post, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Hi Karla, Needed words, indeed! Keep on building that house on the only stable foundation there is... as we can see, you can do that word by word... excellent pen, my friend! stay strong...
Hi Karla, you always have the answers in your mind...and this time they came thru even more profoundly in your words! Great job...and happy that you always know there is light at the end of the everending dark tunnel! (by the way, I've tried to email your other address, and it keeps coming back??) hugs, lindalaw
This is very powerful and sincere. Wonderful Karla. Your right. You don't have to look to others for your worth. Jesus knows you, loves you, and created you. No bad. Right?
Very strong piece, Karla! It speaks of great hope, faith and strength...all of these you have. A wonderful look into your heart and soul. Excellent answer to the challenge! Hugs, Elizabeth :)
Just vulnerable now, Karla. A natural state when times are hard. I'm impressed by the honesty of this write. Especially like the first stanza--powerful feeling and imagery!
You are a melancholic like I am. And still you move upon the hearts and minds of so many. Diligently pressing forward towards an uncertain earthly goal, but an unwavering spiritual one. Some people get their rewards in this life, some will get theirs in the next. An excellent insight into you here dear Karla-friend.
Blessings ...
Karla, good though sad response to Bear Paw's challenge.
Keep the faith and some day you'll realize the riches
that you and your fine talent deserve. -gene.
I think you have responded very well to Carolyn's challenge, Karla. The bonus for your readers is that we get to know you a bit better. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
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One of your best.
Cryssa
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The honesty in your writing is the most striking aspect of this response but there is, as well, a strong inspiration for the rest of us.
John
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love,
Christine
Thank you... Mark
Hope is a marvelous thing, as is your challenge entry.
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
In Christs Love
Michelle~
KEEP ON KEEPIN' ON !
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In Spirit,
Bear
With Love,
Cindy
Cynthia
Lin
Sheila
Love,
Eileen
Blessings ...
Keep the faith and some day you'll realize the riches
that you and your fine talent deserve. -gene.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Regis