Caverns of Darkness (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

Oh, Luv. I am so often in the same cold and lightless cave. Some years. . .oh, well. Always crawl out, don't we!! Stretch our
aching limbs, straighten our spines, and have another go!! I love
you. Phyllis

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

That is a superb image, Karla. Sorry to hear that you have been in the shadows... Remember you are loved.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

Beautiful picture--and I hope and pray you are doing better. Depression takes the taste out of life.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

Sometimes that depression can be shared and sometimes it cannot. Sometimes thoughts and time are what we need. Stay strong, Karla.
Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

lean on us Karla -- we are here to support you my dear friend -- let us be the light that guides you out of the darkness -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

We have all been there, come back soon
Hope you have a good day
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Oh. There you are. I was hoping to find someone I know here. Thank you for being my friend. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Everyone here feels your pain Karla. Staying away is not the solution. Patrick

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Depression in these days of financial insecurity and turmoils is easy to sink into and hard to climb out of but if it is any comfort you are not alone and many of us are in the same boat and without oars. If you have faith that helps, if you have friends that helps as well, and if you have the ability to write then that is even a bigger help but the sad truth is you are the one who can help yourself the most. Hope you find that ladder Karla...
hugs
fee

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

some of the greatest writings are done during our darkest hours. Use the darkness to find the light. Good write. Lady J

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

That, or write about it. Write about every detail, every feeling, every sorted nasty thing that comes out of you. And then share it. If people are offended TOUGH! Perhaps it could be a cathartic for you, perhaps your openness and honesty may help someone else. Perhaps healing and wholeness will flourish after the rocks and weeds are removed from the garden.
Stand strong!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Not always better to stay away but sometimes we can't help it. I hope things get brighter soon Karla.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

The blues have a way of creeping in when you least expect them...things will look better soon, just hang in there.
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Such a sad and lonely feel to this, Karla. Come out and play with your friends ... you'll feel better. ;-)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

That is not so dear Karla as we all need our friends when we startfeeling that way, being alone in the dark just makes matters worst. Believe me I have been there.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Deep and honest poem.Karla hang in there,things will indeed get better before you know it.Always be strong.take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Think, when closing your eyes, that you are within the darkness of a cocoon...when you open them again, you will be a butterfly flying away from the spider's web!

Georg

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

Oh how well I know these feelings, but they do pass eventually. Hang tough, Karla! We love you here on the Den! Many hugs, Rebecca

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Karla I will do what I can to help you, including prayer, but remember even in the darkness his light shines down on you. If you need an ear you know I am here for you, and the same goes for Karen
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Karla,
No matter how you feel we are always here and love and support you.

John

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

I'm sorry your having a hard time Karla. I know this will pass. Please hold on to your faith and the knowledge of knowing you are loved more than you can ever imagine with Jesus. May you feel his love soon.As alwasy you have-

My Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Peace, Krala. May things look brighter soon. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

you have expressed well your feelings of depression--look up and see the beauty around you--it may be forced at first but it will get better-i have been there-it is tough

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

I know how that feels; I'm in that cave right along with you. At least you aren't alone! :) Sorry you feel so bad; it's not easy, is it?? Sad one tonight, Karla; hope brighter days are ahead for you (and for me)! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

I understand this feeling well. For me though, isolation is not healthy. Nice write.