stagnation (a bit of a rant) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

if the job is doing you in
all the rationalization about
"at least i've got a job" isn't
going to prevent a coronary ...
you don't

still, a good write

john+

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

Oh yea Karla do I ever know from whenst these great ranting words come from BUT you know what Karla it is Sunday and Mother's Day so <SMILE> We All Love You and wish you a Happy Mother's Day! Great Write!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

I can SO relate to this one! But someone where you work must need your sunny witness, so bloom where you're planted till God transplants you! Have a Happy Mother's Day!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

Yes we often feel that way but you may be moving forward and not even realize it. Good work Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

Good expression of emotion. Keep an eye on the want adds.......you never know when something better will come along.

Reviewed by Kevin Whitworth

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

I know the feeling. I could have been the inspiration for this piece � were you watching me at work? Just kidding. Stay focused.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

You sure can write well Karla, so I think you have that to be happy about!;-)The awful weather would put anyone on edge, I have you in my prayers;-)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

If your work isn't your passion, find some other way of expressing your passion.
Although, Leo Buscaglia said to make work your passion. Hummmmmmm. Well I will work on that one for you. [smiles] Nice rant.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

just never loose focus of who your are, a poet...

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

been there...know how you feel...chin up, though...write on!

**Mari**

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

I hear you loud and clear sister..! Breathe in for just a second and come soar with me over a crystal blue ocean...

Love ya, Dove

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Ah me, I know exactly how you feel, sucks, but hey, maybe things will get better, Happy Mother's day!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

This is great. I know tomorrow will be hard for you, Karla, but Happy Mother's Day anyway.
Take care,
Jill

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

karla, i know just how you feel. i feel the same way you do at times. but all we can do is pray that we get a breakthrough in our situation, and we can also pray for a breakthrough in this weather pattern we've been having. too many people have suffered at the hands of mother nature, and they need our prayers and thoughts. may we get an end to this danged weather pattern SOON! :( (((HUGS))) good write! love, your twin, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Amen! to the Karla! I don't know if this helps, but remember, you are not alone....
-Bear