words (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jamie Gilcig (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2004

Very powerful and raw. I like this one. Hang in there.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 20, 2003

(((((( Hugs )))) Robert is right you are loved, always remeber that.
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}} Never forget you're loved.

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

These words hurt... I can feel it. But know, my friend, that there are people who care for you, who will pray for you, who love you!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

words are indeed very powerful... well done!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

You and your sister are having a bad day today. Why? Was it just the family reunion? Of is something else happening to bring up your anguish?

Like I said to your sister I will say to you, I am sorry that you are in pain. Your family members are sick people. Learn from their mistakes and be a better person than they are.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

6-16-03

Sticks N Stones MAYBE MAY BREAK MY BONES,
Karla You Are Strong_ Poem Or Not,Ought,Cones_

Heads, What You Do Not Hear, They Still Say, Behind Your Back,i.e.So Do NOT Let It,Dismay_

Get You Down_What Goes Round Comes Around,
Fear Only Fear In Itself,Who Cares What Round_

Ugly People Think Or Say About What I Write,
It Is (The Truth You Never Heard)_My Delight_

You Can't Handle It,Go Read Porn Poetry,Junk,
Or Just Plain Like: Tell Them All To_Klunk,

GO TO HELL_

Me, TRASK, I Await Them . Satan's Gates_Race,
I (You)Will Be Right In There Face....

Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

This is so true and such an important lesson for everyone to learn. Here is more fuel to that fire. http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?AuthorID=14826&id=65515

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Too many children grow up in homes like this. So sad, but remember you are today, what YOU decided to do with your life. Your present and your future, you are in charge of. A successful life is the best revenge. Love to you both.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

i remember those words, too, karla, and i will always remember the look of shock and hurt on your face when our oldest sister said that "you would always be a loser, user, and abuser, and you'll never change". it about destroyed me, too, and i nearly committed suicide because of it (but was scared to carry out the suicide; for fear of what it would do to daddy). thank god god intervened when i needed him most; i am still alive today, and i am very glad i am! (((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears, tears, tears <

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

I never believed that saying, either!!! Words are mighty arrows, can pierce and hurt, or be like love arrows. I cry with you, friend....stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear