Let Freedom Ring (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Let Freedom Ring
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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I was told, growing up, that I was worthless, that my dreams were stupid, and that I would always be a loser. I believed the lies. And now, I have a powerful weapon in my defense. And I shall never again remain silent. LET FREEDOM RING!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ shut up, just shut up i don't want to hear what you have to say shut up, just shut up your words are not important, anyway shut up, just shut up one more word, i will have to slap your face shut up, just shut up get out of my sight...you are a disgrace and so i hid the words deep within was expressing myself such a sin shut up, just shut up i don't want to hear what you have to say shut up, just shut up your words are not important, anyway shut up, just shut up one more word, i will have to slap your face shut up, just shut up get out of my sight...you are a disgrace and so i hid the words in my soul the hurt i felt was taking its toll shut up, just shut up i don't want to hear what you have to say shut up, just shut up your words are not important, anyway shut up, just shut up one more word, i will have to slap your face shut up, just shut up get out of my sight...you are a disgrace and so i wrote, but my words were tossed never to be seen, forever lost shut up, just shut up i don't want to hear what you have to say shut up, just shut up your words are not important, anyway shut up, just shut up one more word, i will have to slap your face shut up, just shut up get out of my sight...you are a disgrace and so i hid the rage and my tears anger my companion through the years shut up, just shut up i don't want to hear what you have to say shut up, just shut up your words are not important, anyway shut up, just shut up one more word, i will have to slap your face shut up, just shut up get out of my sight...you are a disgrace and on nine-one-one, the words burst free i will not shut up, believe you me! (C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 3, 2004

(((((((Karla)))))))
Never shut up, be proud, because you have a lot to be proud off, your words touched the depth of my soul and brought tears to my eyes, I am so sorry you and Karen were treated like this, you deserve better...
God Bless you my Sister and Friend
We share a blood bond, the blood of Christ
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2004

Never believe those that try to put you down. They are usually just jealous of a talent that you have that they do not.

A sad write Karla, but you can and have overcome

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Sad, but powerful write. Excellent.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

O Boy this is sad Karla!!

Hugs and love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2004

Oh Karla..this is sad...so glad you became the strong
woman you are today...powerful write...floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

This grabs the senses and won't let go! Excellent portrayal Karla, of stark reality! Brave work!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

HUGS! This is a very brave and freeing write.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

POWERFUL write, Karla...I love the rich flavor of reflectivity to go with this...BRILLIANT!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

(((Karla)))

Indeed you HAVE been set free! Such a heartshattering write; I am sorry we had to endure this, especially YOU! This poem made me CRY! May you always continue to write; may you continue to heal from the past hurts! I pray for a Healing Touch for your mind and emotions!

(((((((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))))))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears galore <