Ghost Garden (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Wondrous!

Ron

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

Your words flowed like melted butter over hot breakfast toast!!!!
Exceptional!!!!
Floored!!!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

THIS IS WONDERFUL! whoops sorry, this is exceptional writing ace

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

The imagery is exquisite, Ace. I feel this one.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

You just get better and better. Another great write.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

I love the style this poem was wrought with. It flows with such grace and beauty. You've given me another perspective of garden.
:)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Enchanting. I can almost smell the garden, let alone see it..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Absolutely beautiful Robert!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Oh Robert, this was so beautiful and moving, your poetry is exquisite,

Reindeer

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Well done Robert. I like how you did this. Lots of visuals here in the garden of love. Excellent work.

Reviewed by A. Gagn� (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Perfection. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Fond memories in our hearts are wonderful, as is this poem.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

A very loving and longing poem about a love that has gone but only to be reborn again in memories of her.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

It is funny how a place can linger in our minds long after the love has faded the memory of that place or sometimes an object can reawaken the memories of that love.A really romantic write Robert that I'm sure a lot of us can relate to,

Felix

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Exquisite!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

This one brought my tears, touched my soul deeply Jude. Some we share our souls with are so full of life, beauty and color, even in the midst of sorrow and death they become unforgettable.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

This is such a fine write...brings those memories from my childhood rushing forward.

Allen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

One of your finest, this one rocks.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

You have captured something so beautiful,here, Jude. It is true, it seems to me, that some people can have that effect on anything with which they come into contact: that the world that they enter just "lives and breathes" because of their very presence, because of their charismatic qualities and irrespective of their mood. Some have the gift and are embued with the ability to sow "life and colour" in the world and into the outer and inner landscapes of others. This reminds me of the fairytales of Cinderella and Snow White - THOSE kind of personal qualities. Once you have met such a person, you can never be the same again: their "life" and effects stay with you for ever. This poem lives and breathes with a light and tensile emotion, spoken from the heart: a beautiful mirror reflecting straight back that of which you speak. The rhythm and flow are like a River of Life running through it and the images delightful. TY for this creation - a perennial!! Kate xx

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

This is Absolutely Beautiful and such a beautiful way to remember those now gone from our sight A garden in your heart How totally Beautiful.
this I will remember.
Love Tracey

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

I love this one Jude, memories that lay soft and gentle on one's mind brings smiles....touching write..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Memories of my grandmother and her garden came to the fore
along with my tears, in this exquisite rendering.Kudo's!

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

A very beautiful and deeply moving poem you've penned, Jude ...

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Pensive and tender write, RJ...

Reviewed by Ron Henry (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

A beautiful work. The similes are well chosen. This poem packs a lot of emotion. Very moving.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Great sentiments, Robert! I like this one a lot!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

This write touched my heart and soul, Robert. Some memories are so precious that they retain their vivid beauty and replay the moments we spent, throughout our lifetime. They seem so long ago and yet, they seem like only yesterday.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

I like this and it reminds me of some people that I know that also planted a garden of memories in me.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Another awesome piece. I especially love the ending.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

And So Far Away Romantic You...

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

This is an absolutely beautiful write. Touches deeply.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

The last stanza says so much about you. Well, all of it does. And in these genius poems you write about the way you see things, I wonder how you became so prolific, so interested and observant. A blessing and a gift from someone long ago and far away. This is beautiful and it makes me cry.

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Poetic verses and beauty in this one just Gorgeous:)
"At times your smile
Would blossom like a flower
So vivid and colorful
The entire garden
Would blush with envy "
Niley

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

This poem made me cry,it is sad yet beautiful,the ending was something I can relate to also,(there have been many beautiful gardens in my life and some I miss more than others.)At least Robert,we can always keep the flowers in our memories where even times 'long ago' are kept sweet fresh and lovely(just like your garden of poetry),a beauty of a poem was this one,bravo!
Best wishes always
from
kay.

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

I started looking at this, wishing for spring, to get back on my hands and knees, playing in mother earth. Then I was changed (or transformed?) into blossoming from the love and nuture of another. Great poem. I now have a new "feeling" about my little garden...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

well done