It had no shape
It was felt rather than seen
It was envisioned
Within the contours of my dream
...awesome
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Jude, These are words of terrific force. In my opinion your dream represents the animal called Hope and you described this in a most unique way. I love your writings.
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2005
myth and wonder.... jude-style.... I'm enjoying this explosion of vibrant images and thoughts... ;)
In dreams we envisage strange thoughts, those that hide in our sub-concious. All that is needed, is to learn to understand the beauty of their meaning. Beautiful imagery Jude.
warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2005
Beautiful images of a great dreamer. Love the excitment of wonder one feels while reading this. Thanks for adding a new image for me to dream about tonight :-)
The flames were purifying the dream within me,,, onto the shores of my innermost convictions,,, Ya Salam! This is a perfect expression. A poem that resonates in one's soul for a long time, perhaps forever.
Terrific, I agree.
Yup, well me and Sherry seem to taking the same jungle trail through this dream-weaving sequence and are following the same signs through to "Home"! The only other thing that strikes me about this is the intensity of thought which is, as it were, burning a hole in the "paper" here... ESP-type of projected thinking is very powerful, especially with those you "track" with; and I think the subconcscious realms of sleep and dreaming can be a crucible in which such streams can concentrate down to their purest essence. Finding that you are no longer lost must be almost as good as (for me)finding what you thought you had lost... but even better is to discover what you never knew you HAD lost until you find it for the first time - or rather, it finds you!! Like having lived forever in shadows and suddenly walking into true light. Perhaps tomorrow will bring the "killing of the fatted calf", so to speak... hope we are all invited to the feast: your islanders DO seem to be mighty hospitable!! :))) (Damn... and all I was going to do was to cut and paste Sherry's comment... TOMORROW I'll be brief...) TY Kate xx
Permit me to assume that these two dream episodes are real. After reading them both, I intuit that maybe your perceptions of reality are changing and that you are opening up to deeper levels of conciousness. This can be disconcerting as well as exhilerating. Or am I just "all wet"?! At any rate, I enjoyed both journeys...
This poem is fantastic in that it is so subjective for the readers. I see the sun as centering and possessing nurturing warmth and as being the light that chases away fears found in shadowy darkness, and "animal" being perhaps the mother figure. An island (a solitary space) surrounded by fire (trapped, perilous potential). Our child always calls out to our mother when we feel helpless or frightened and her very presence magically relieves all our apprehension and projects feelings of love, comfort and safety. The unconditional love of our Mother lifts us up hand helps us to find our center and our way home. This is awesome writing, Robert.
Take care,
Sherry
...that is because you are the sun animal. In reality, no one knows us better than we know ourselves. We just have to be willing to listen to our own voices sometimes. I really like the mood you set with this poem. ~ Sara
Reviewed by A. Gagné (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Beautiful. :) It was a pleasure to catch up on reading all your latest poems. You're my favorite living poet!
An exotic island. Islanders dancing on shore. What a wonderful dream. Reading about your dreams makes me think positively before I go to sleep. Maybe mine will take a turn for the better. Excellent write, my friend, Jude.
Some pretty vivid images here to absorb and think about. I read this a few times and wish I was a dream interpreter cause this one would i'm sure be pretty interesting to decipher. Such depth, great write.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
It was felt rather than seen
It was envisioned
Within the contours of my dream
...awesome
In dreams we envisage strange thoughts, those that hide in our sub-concious. All that is needed, is to learn to understand the beauty of their meaning. Beautiful imagery Jude.
warm hugs
Elga
Great journey
and kool dream
William ..... Peace
could see you there
loved the colors
hmm...i've journeyed like this before
i like how you make the dream
a composite for reflection
thanks,
d.
Terrific, I agree.
Love Tinka
them very much. Great write.
Reindeer
Take care,
Sherry
Glad you found you...
Love and peace
etw
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