Sex Dream Sea (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

hot dream...i haven't had one of those in a long time...sounds wonderfully arousing

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

She was the hottest just before the wave broke and you awoke?

Ron

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Dreams are so pure, like love, hard to forget.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on March 9, 2005

Dear Jude,

A goddess for sure to inspire such a beauty of a write. Delightfully delectable imagery Jude, well penned.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

enticing~~~~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Very passionate write! Some deams are great to experience :-)

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

What an outstanding dream/write here Robert...excellent in its depiction.

Allen

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Nothing beats a wonderful dream.
A splendid write.

Peace and sunshine

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Beautiful and excellent Jude, this was outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Wonderful write... create by the power of the sea, in you and around you... well done...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Least the ones in dreams don't nag nag nag you, to the point of having to go and pretend to work on car..
Or wonder why you have not read their femanimal minds...

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

As James Brown would say: "Too funky in here":-)
Enjoyed it o' flame-nibbling sea-roving dream-traveling poet.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

A beautiful, dreamy write!!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Nice dream, Robert, made me want to crawl right into our dreamspace and create an awesome partner for her for my own delicious imaginings. Beautiful poetry! "I could still taste her flames" What a great line.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Hi Robert:

Wonderful write and very imaginative.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Ok, Robert... but can she type? cross one eye? (not as easy as it sounds) or sing on key? These are also important attributes for that priceless connection.

I'm teasing... (so unlike me!) If this is what you dream, it's a wonder you're awake, by choice, anyway. I know, I know... I've taken a really remarkably vivid, beautifully expressed vision and gotten silly. It's a funny day... a typical "grinny" katy-day. Sigh... Forgive my babbling... I do love the poem. (smile) katy xox.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Well, this is not hard to figure out. Let's see. It's the Angel of Truth come to give you great knowledge of the mysteries of life. Those Angels of Truth, they're always wet like that with perky breasts. Halle Berry was the Angel of Truth emerging from the sea to meet Pierce Brosnan when she debuted as a Bond girl. I'm right. Go ahead. Tell me I'm right! I know my Angels of Truth, baby. You're so deeply penetrating on this one, Jude, and hot too. ;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

A beauty Robert!!

Well expressed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

"I could still taste her flames"
Outstanding poetry! The verse is
so unique and great.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Whooo, whooo! Hot-cha-cha. Seriously Jude, Beautiful write. (5th stanza first line last two words...transposed?)

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Great write, Robert.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

lol still laughing at Ed......
but seriously this is lovely :)
pax A

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Amazing how powerful dreams can truly be.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Yes Robert the power of the subconscious is often kind to us. Great way to express this dream, perfect balance.

Felix

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Ed you'e worse than Homer Simpson and Pinchey!!

Wow Rob, what a dream, sure beats the heck outa the one I had last night, ONYA mate.
:)Big Grin
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

Beautiful poem, Jude ... I loved the imagery ...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

...(g) is for "goddess"? "galleon"?... Hmmm... in my book it would have to be "gallop" in this instance, as it puts into my mind the thought of riding white horses bareback!! (Probably because Chanti's mention of "chimeric" reminds me of my "Sphinx"?!) Not surprised this isn't part of your dream sequence, Jude, as what could either precede or follow it?! I love it's freedom and independence - maverick and RAcey!!!!! WTG, TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

I have dreams like this of late, Jude. I hate waking up from them. But the nice thing is, often, when I go back to sleep, the dream continues. Thank you for sharing this delightful offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

I loved the images in this poem - and then I read Ed's comment and...it's not the same. LOL! Great poem! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

lol at Ed! He is such a boy!

Jude this flows so well. You are so prolific you cannot have spent much time on this and yet nobody reading it would know. It is a superb piece of writing. It could be viewed as chimerical but in my mind dreams have a way of touching reality. Even if your dream never materialise, it leaves a footprint within your heart. I hope you have more and are inspired to write more in this romantic vein.
Chanti

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

well done

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

Balances the intellectual and spiritual dimensions with equally stimulating thoughts in the social-sexual plane...Strictly as interpretation, I intuit that a gorgeous babe will be rocking your world soon(lol)...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

Everytime I see a Maine Lobster dripping with butter, I feel the same way...ed