the Transforming Moment (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

inspiring

Reviewed on May 1, 2005

Metaphysical. Hurry up and wait.

Ron

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

yes, this speaks so much truth. Never wait for anyone...for that waiting is hope and that hope holds you prisoner. But waiting for everyone sets you free.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

what a moment to ponder Ace, super. G

Reviewed by Darcey Patil (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Ace,
The Transforming Moment is very exciting! I have found my place among you poets but I'm just a baby compared to most. When I read all the poetry my heart aches and I understand...It's truly a beautiful experience!

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Masterful, as always Wise One. Our thoughts have power, both positive and negative. We really do create our own worlds in that respect. There are a thousand doubts, interruptions, criticisms, fears, reasons, obstacles that block our dreams. That is the test of our life force...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Quite the inspirational penning, Shaman. Flowing with the quintessence of a spiritual truth. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

nicely written, even if you did start with a double negative :}

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Excellent write...

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

You are an inspiration, Jude ... Beautifully written ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

So true. Dogged determination. When everyones telling you to quit.
Great timely kick up the butt words.
Gotta keep this..

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

well done

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

These words strike a chord in my brain there Robert life does often seem like a series of lineups where we wait for the next stage of our existance to emerge. Well done.
Felix

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Deep and true thoughts penned well Ace

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

With every breath, we transform into the next one.
You speak with great wisdom and courage Robert, and bring forth
a peaceful light beam to follow.
Great work.

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Wonderful message and inspirational poem Robert!!

Happy Easter To You!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Interesting dilemma...let me figure it out.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... No. Not sleeping - humming! :)) Can feel the sunshine warming the garden and the flowers are sure in for a treat today as the Hive enlivens, coaxed by the whistling of the Beekeeper. ("What's she on about?!!") A taste of honey here today, Jude, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

good inspiration here to follow your dream however much it takes. k

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

"And when the night is cloudy,
There is still a light that shines on me,
Shine on until tomorrow, let it be.
.....
There will be an answer, let it be.
Let it be, let it be,
Whisper words of wisdom, let it be"
(Beatles 'Let it Be' lyrics)

Thank you for your words of wisdom Jude. The words of this song came to me in response. Insight brings illumination, illumination brings revelation.
With gratitude... Chanti

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

all is one... much appreciate this poignant write, Sir Ace... excellent work-- as usual.

Reviewed by Patrick McCormick

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Very nice. Climb every mountain. I enjoyed it. Well written.

Pat.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

A wonderful poetic message.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

wonderful words of wisdom penned here Robert...A very get up and go get them poem.

Allen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Oh yes and you are so correct in what you said especially those two last lines.

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

This one cuts like a knife
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

The guru speaks well in this brilliant motivating poem!
I like when you share your energy and power of thought!
Everyone benefits!;-)
etw

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

I needed to hear this today...............

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

We should all strive to be like a dry sponge in the ocean, absorbing as much as possible knowing no limit to our quest for love, knowledge and understanding. Our lives should matter to many, for it was a very selective process that has allowed us to be here, and particularly to be here now. Wonderful thought provoking verses, Robert. I really like this one, so positive and uplifting.
Take care,
Sherry