There is a fire in her eyes
Like a warm fireplace
In the middle of snow-covered forest
Her fingers massage the heat of her thoughts
Into the muscles of my mind
And across the contours of my body
With her electric stroke
Invigorating, pulsating
So deeply arousing
There is a mysterious quality in her gaze
It breaks through the haze
Of my most ardent reflections
She knows how to get into me
How to surround me
How to jumpstart my deepest desires
And calm my frenzied sensations of being alive
She knows how to bring me be back to life
And soothe my overactive mind
When all the nefarious afflictions of the world engulf me
And tear away at the fabric of my soul
She move her hands slowly across my face
And works them down across my thighs
And knows just the right moment to overthrow
The state of my resistance
Dear Jude,
It's so easy to slip into the usual phrases in order to express our appreciation for your talent. Words like 'beautiful', 'meaningful', 'powerful', 'passionate' etc. come to mind. All I can tell you is that you have that rare gift that allows you to express in such a way so as to grab the imaginations of those who read your poetry. I often find myself thinking 'If only I could express it that way' but this is your gift and we are but admirers. I will always love your work.
Chanti
Love it when you cut loose like this, meaning that when I read the poem, I could feel how deeply you looked within...and I too have such a dream, so could relate to this one. Fantastic. Keeper.
A strong desire to always read more of your work comes from the talent you possess in writes such as this
You have a way with words that is unmeasurable and inspiring
Thanks
Antoinette
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Life is best when lived with this kind of passion.
Splendid poetry Ace.
This fizzes and crackles with a live and static electric that smoulders... seems a little heat and energy transferral goes a long way! Burning the midnight oil seems more than acceptable in this instance and a great way to unwind after a long day's work. What sweet capitulation and the sort of white flag that no one would mind waving! :)) Irresistible and smooth as satin sheets, Jude. TY Kate xx
This is so romantic and sexy. She is everything we all aspire to be to someone in our lives. Warm and wonderful poetry, Robert, I really love this. A keeper for sure.
Take care,
Sherry
You hold back, understate the obvious--which makes this write all the more erotic and hypnotic. Mystery is incredibly arousing. You brought me back to life...
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
It's so easy to slip into the usual phrases in order to express our appreciation for your talent. Words like 'beautiful', 'meaningful', 'powerful', 'passionate' etc. come to mind. All I can tell you is that you have that rare gift that allows you to express in such a way so as to grab the imaginations of those who read your poetry. I often find myself thinking 'If only I could express it that way' but this is your gift and we are but admirers. I will always love your work.
Chanti
Best antidepressant in the world, is love, lots of it too.
;)Ch'erie
You have a way with words that is unmeasurable and inspiring
Thanks
Antoinette
Splendid poetry Ace.
Love & Light,
Joseph
A most pleasureable and sexy write Robert. One can feel the heat!
Perfect poetry!
Lisa
A splendid write.
Paul;-]
Allen
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
seductive senusous classy poetry !
Eileen