By my calculation, seven times more than me. For I only write once a week, while you write every day. What if I wrote only once a year? I'd still have enough poems for a book. Write on!!! (and on... ?)
Right here: "Let’s see, maybe there is a poem out there
Reaching out from the heavens
Like a lover’s embrace
Landing in my heart like ice and steel
Seducing me with candles and wax
Melting onto the structure of my voice"
is the crux of the poem, containing the meaning of
everything above and below it!
Excellent and deep, as always!
Yes, the process of formulating a poem is a seduction and like any seduction, one must be open to the advance...a tenderness at first when the poem enters your mind and then a fever of fired synapses which results, one hopes, in a thunderous climax...
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2005
Whatever you write about always comes out good Ace!
... and then taking a life of its own and jumping out of the pen to have a dialogue with you, as you both sit or run or fly, but certainly breathe (live) about the page. That's poetry!
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
...Well, for starters, I guess you could write something that is a positively charged essence which filters through the infinite stratums of universal thought, guided by the great imagination and motivated by the energy to become what it aspires to reveal... but then, you just did! You are what you write and write what you are... the rest of us will stick to colouring books... :)) LOL Kate xx
We never know don't we...all depends on the moodswing or something walking by....or even a tragedy that strikes...and nails you to the ground.
Nope we never know what may come up...even a seagull might poop on our heads today huh?!! That could be humor for us but great anger for someone else!!
If you don't know what you wrote today I sure as hell don't know either, what are you asking us for...sheesh! LOL! ;) ed
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2005
You wrote and took me many places all about life and the ending is Magnificent.
Ice and steel...
This poem of many is wonderful& then some..
Thanks so very much
Tracey
I was hoping to have time today to sit and write, but I have been so busy since about 4 am that now I am too tired to listen to my muse. Instead I will read your poem and imagine a bit about each of the topics you mentioned and consider myself blessed to at least have poetry in my heart, soul and mind if not committed to the page. This is an interesting peek into the workings of your mind, Robert. Looks pretty nice from here! ;~)
Take care,
Sherry
That was pretty good, Jude. Next time write about me. ;-) ~~Nordette
Oh, okay, I'll quit poking at ya...for oh, I don't know...a few minutes. :-D Yes, it is a very good poem within the discipline.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Ron
Right here: "Let’s see, maybe there is a poem out there
Reaching out from the heavens
Like a lover’s embrace
Landing in my heart like ice and steel
Seducing me with candles and wax
Melting onto the structure of my voice"
is the crux of the poem, containing the meaning of
everything above and below it!
Excellent and deep, as always!
so natural and free flowing
What ever you write about, it's sure to be read--you are one hell of a poet--and I am honored to read your fantastic words!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Jennifer
Paul;-]
Great piece and the seduction of words
isn't that why we write?
Love & Light,
Joseph
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
thats to show you one always
has something to write about
William .....Peace
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
peace
Nope we never know what may come up...even a seagull might poop on our heads today huh?!! That could be humor for us but great anger for someone else!!
Love Tinka
of life in its many splendored ways.
Eileen
Ice and steel...
This poem of many is wonderful& then some..
Thanks so very much
Tracey
Take care,
Sherry
Oh, okay, I'll quit poking at ya...for oh, I don't know...a few minutes. :-D Yes, it is a very good poem within the discipline.