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Dream Scene (l) ... Nature's Wings
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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In my dream
I am walking through a dark forest

The wind is exceedingly strong
Speaking through the leaves
Of marigold trees

Answering to the revolving breezes
In tones
Of rustling color

There is a solitary limb on one tree
Green with spring moonlight

Swaying
Into a vision of stillness

Alive and gesturing upward
Toward the vast network of stars

On this branch there is an owl
Gazing toward me
Fluttering its wings
Pruning its feathers

Its eyes piecing the fabric
Of the night air

I rise to match its eyes
It stares into mine
Into the face of my dream

And hoots a sense of approval
As it flies off into the distance

In my dream I am perched on a limb
Looking over the forest
At one with the motion of nature’s wings

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Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2005
This is really unique I like this one alot!. Natures wings, getting the approval of the Owl, master of the night, looking over the forest brings alot of honor in this. Absolutely magnificent!(c :)

Reviewed on May 30, 2005
I like how you did the flip flop in this poem- from Nature to YOU-YOur visions filled with so much imagery-Wonderful Robert- what's your nickname? any? I enjoy your writings, you fell upon my eyes one evening, glad you did.... I like what you have to say and how you feel- HUGs,Sheee

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Unique N Differently Done Good Write On!

TRASK

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
You pen your dreams well.
Keep dreaming and penning.

Joy and starlight
HH

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Sounds like a very good dream to have, Jude. And you have shared it so well in this poetic offering. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Beautiful dreamer. I can imagine you in ancient times, Jude, seeped in Nature religion and magic. This poem conjures up visions of that time...

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
This is the sort of dream we wish would go on and on... it is a special poet who can first express it but, as well, bring the reader along. Some pieces cause involuntary sighs... this is one. katy xox

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Jude,

This is now one of my favorite "Jude" poems! I am saving this, it holds a special meaning for me! Especially right here:
"I rise to match its eyes
It stares into mine
Into the face of my dream"

You capture so much...Mystery, Wisdom, Vision and much more.
Excellent and inspiring work!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
It seems on your journey into the world of enlightenment you have taken a bit of time to pause and digest all that you have consumed to this point; yet you are perched and ready to move on to the next higher limb once all of the truth and understanding of your current position are realized. This is a fine piece depicting the ever changing position of the evolving spirit. Wonderful write! A peaceful journey to you, my friend.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
This is potent stuff buddy and I tell you I think I had similiar dreams back in the sixties when the weed was good and pure. lol Just kidding great write jude and very enjoyable.

Felix

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
The wise owl... it is through the power of listening that we are heard... beautiful dream

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Dreams can be fascinating, scary, enlightening, mysterious.... Enjoyed your walk through the forest immensely, and your sense of being the owl who overlooked you. Good write!

Peace.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Beautiful dream of transformation! I could feel the action, and have felt it :-)

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
A wonderful dream! Excellent!

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
This flows as light as air rushing through
one's face on a beach....really smooth
and Excellent write!
be reading more of your work.

Rich Suarez

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
A mystical journey into the unknown
Outstanding
Peter

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Thanks for giving us a walk through your dreams. You are certainly a wise poet.

Reviewed on May 27, 2005
This was so beautiful, very lovely Robert!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Most outstanding Robert!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Owls are truly sage creatures, and this is a fascinating poem, Robert.

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Visually evocative. Bravo.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Bingo! Or is it bongo..?! This is wide-eyed and mesmeric, Jude - and very elegant. Love the stabilising and soothing sounds of vast, flapping wings, very tranquil. Before I warbled on yesterday, I was going to say that Fertile Surface had a kind of mirroring quality... somehow this has the same self-reflexive feel to it, too. You'll have us all believing that even pigs can fly with all these dream sequences that seem to plausible and possible... but for now, that branch of yours is going to be getting mighty crowded: budge up a bit, folks... room for a little one?! :)) K xx

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Cool dream. Cool poem. Totally awesome owl to bring you such a powerful affirmation of the visionary gifts of poetry that you so generously bestow upon the world. Peace.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
This is outstanding Robert...I love the mood here.

Allen

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
A wondrous dream. I also like what Dawn said. :-) What a transformation! ~~Nordette

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
I love this owls are very special.I like what Dawn said;-) I'd love to know what you'd say...the poem is symbolic of wisdom and divinity

Alrisha

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
awesome conclusion to this dream. my question is, are you going to hoot your approval when somebody flies up to your branch and looks you in the eye? and do you have wings? lots of great images throughout. Dawn

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
beautiful...i love this, the vision...and at the end i can see myself on the branch

ann


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