have just read about 10 of your poems, reading backwards by date. the final image you offer in this, the last of the poems I've missed of yours, is, I think, something I've been straining to see - the hope of "my destiny glowing" mirrored back at me. or some sign of good fortune, a turning tide to meet my rest in God and my best foot forward. so then, it seems your own "random soliloquy of purpose" has done it. your words and ideas are hope reflected. a sincere thank you, Dawn
Yes indeed. This is why this country girl likes to go fresh-water fishing. The water, the nature, the serenity all blend together and take you to that calm place of clarity where you can see what it is you are meant to do. So, are you saying I don't have to bring any tackle, just sit on the bank and inhale?
You know this is not the first time I've been by this poem. I think the first two times your words must have hypnotized me and in a trance I wandered off and forgot to review. :-) I'm still sort of staring at the poem like it's one of those spinning hypno wheels. LOL
Must be the leaves spinning on the water's surface as I drift into the glow of my destiny. You know, Shaman, you've got to stop doing this. Turn the frequency down there in the Bronx. I can't take it here in Jersey, being all vibrational the way I am. Hehe. Lovely, profoundly transforming poem, Jude.
The power of these falling leaves is in their ability to embody and reflect the shimmering essence of a soul dedicated to the truth of the journey of its own being. In doing so, they help to create a path along which others may stroll and encounter their own healing "Leaves of Thought."
I see you are like myself and every now and then commune with the wonders of nature, this is a great poem and lesson on slowing down and seeing what is around us. Good write Jude.
Don't you like tea, then?! :)) Love the meditative and transcendental qualities to this, Jude, bringing a sense of fresh equilibrium, balance and detox to the soul, and instilling new vision and a sense of peaceful harmony... like a hum! Has the yin-yan of warmth and coolness, too. Forwards, backwards; up and down. Kind of a complete poetic workout-cum-healthspa whilst supping on some exotic fruit cup. Thanks for the revival; I was beginning to think that my air supply had been cut off, but this is quite the mouth-to-mouth resus.... I'll just take this intravenously today, rather than the Earl Grey: cheers!! Hope you're feeling equally glowing and back in great shape again. LOL Kate xx PS ARE you the great WW reincarnated?! :))
You made me feel all dreamy with the leaves toppling softly into the water; what a beautiful image you painted. Water reflects back to us but also mirrors that which is above us. The leaves are a subtle reminder of the ways that we are bound to the earth. In the end, we, like the leaves, will try to save the world from itself as we commit our self back to the earth giving back all that we borrowed from her for this leg of our eternal journey. Excellent reflective write, Robert.
Very interesting indeed, Robert! I've often known that people read into tea leaves that are left at the bottom of the cup; but I've never heard anyone reading the pattern of falling leaves. This was something different.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Must be the leaves spinning on the water's surface as I drift into the glow of my destiny. You know, Shaman, you've got to stop doing this. Turn the frequency down there in the Bronx. I can't take it here in Jersey, being all vibrational the way I am. Hehe. Lovely, profoundly transforming poem, Jude.
Ron
Reindeer
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William ......Peace
You take us right into the meditation with you! THIS is one to be
spoken...hope you will be reciting it!
Excellent!
TRASK
Glow on dear Jude.
Chanti
This one made me smile with its imagery and gentle wisdom and inspiration; well done! You, my friend, are a MasterPoet, with your vision. BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Felix
You have the talent to make every reader a part of the scenery, and once you've finished, all they can do is sigh.
Superb.
Lisa
Paul;-)
Peter
Love Tinka
Peace and happiness
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Allen
Peace and love, Carole
What's up with that lately? I haven't heard from Debs for some time.
Take care,
Sherry
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And just what do you see there, my guru? Introspective excellence (as per usual).
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