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Overcome
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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The day begins like a teardrop of ambiguity
Falling into a vast network of forlorn suppositions

Where chills of reason are running across my spine
On the way to the viaduct
Of tomorrow’s inevitable downpour

Yet my nature will not allow these negative impulses
To gather in my throat and speak words
Surrounding my vision
With heartache and woe

But motivate me to remain vigilant
Through these trying times

And never falter from my faith
To overcome
   

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 Reviews of "Overcome"
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
Very uplifting. Thanks for sharing, Jude. :)

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
Thanks for this inspirational write, Sir Ace; been feeling overcome of late... As usual, a flawless capture.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on August 22, 2005
A bunch of rebels built this country because of that "stubborn bone" that seems to be engineered into us, Jude. We're survivors. And though we may face God knows what in the times ahead, I beleive a new and long overdue paradigm will emerge from the ruins...well done!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
Now you got me feeling down, but like the old song says. We Shall Overcome, ... Someday.

What got into me?

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
Excellent message! You have such a way with words!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
It will pass. Time will tick away, and you will overcome once more. In the mean time, just sit back, relax and enjoy the peacefulness of all things around you.

Lisa

Reviewed by Leah Wilson
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
Very creative phrases you have written. I admire your writings and just as much admire the dicipline you exude in meeting obstacles that present themselves in your path. We should all learn to put our faith into words, and not to speak our fears or woes. Standing ovation for you on this one! Love, Leah

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Emotive and inspiringing...such self control!

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
A fine tribute to faith filled self control..

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
This is great, Ace!
It touched me and inspired me.
Thank you.

Bonnie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Amen Robert
stick to your guns

William .......Peace


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Brave words of uplifting spirit tha you demonstrate in this write Jude and words to give the rest of us hope to draw on as well.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Perseverance will see you through those trying times my friend!!

Well written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
There will always be situations that come into our lives that will try to knock us to the ground destroying our faith in the future as well as in ourselves, others and our belief in a higher power. These are the trials we have been warned about. It is in our strength to look forward, and in finding a positive within all the negative which has rained upon us, that will elevate us to a higher plane. The road to enlightenment can be a very rough and painful one, but as we tread forward, we learn new clarity and are rewarded with another glimpse of the beauty that lies within our future. Great poem, excellent flow and awesome images.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
A testament to your strength, to persevere and keep your balance whatever might come your way. You have trained yourself well, for it takes much work to behave this way! Great example,bravo Jude!

Eileen

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
To be able to juxtapose a clearly visible "downside" ("teardrop") with a celebration of the positive ("my nature will not allow these negative impulses...") and cause no disruption to the poetry is a gift you have, Jude.

So gently, yet so fully, do you bear your inner self... it's quite remarkable, really. katy xox

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Yup, overcoming's good... if YOU can overcome, then that gives the rest of us hope. Makes me think of life on the high wire, and not giving in to the winds that seek to knock you off; looking straight ahead and neither up or down is the way to move forwards, I guess, keeping the perspectives rock solid and the vision right in front of your eyes. Vision is everything and without it "the people perish". Must be because I'm kinda tripping round the dark side of the moon myself that suddenly the lights have gone out... overdosing on Anne Sexton, I think; need to get back to Keats and Browning. Keep The Faith... has Tinka already said that?! Sorry Tinka! :)) Another fine soliloquy, Jude. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
You may be momentarily overcome, but are far from being overwhelmed. This is some incredibly deep thought.... -- Duke

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Perseverance in adversity will see you through trying times

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Staying strong is never easy. But, it is something that must be done. In the end we are only accountable for ourselves. Excellent poem Jude. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Powerful thoughts, Jude. I hope some of your wisdom will rub off on me. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
and this is why I faithfully read your poems, Jude - hoping that a little of your incredible resolve in the face of a future dark or uncertain at best will rub right off on me. seriously. the first couplet is brilliant writing and your focused thinking and delivery throughout are truly amazing. Never falter from your faith. Dawn


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