A bunch of rebels built this country because of that "stubborn bone" that seems to be engineered into us, Jude. We're survivors. And though we may face God knows what in the times ahead, I beleive a new and long overdue paradigm will emerge from the ruins...well done!
It will pass. Time will tick away, and you will overcome once more. In the mean time, just sit back, relax and enjoy the peacefulness of all things around you.
Very creative phrases you have written. I admire your writings and just as much admire the dicipline you exude in meeting obstacles that present themselves in your path. We should all learn to put our faith into words, and not to speak our fears or woes. Standing ovation for you on this one! Love, Leah
There will always be situations that come into our lives that will try to knock us to the ground destroying our faith in the future as well as in ourselves, others and our belief in a higher power. These are the trials we have been warned about. It is in our strength to look forward, and in finding a positive within all the negative which has rained upon us, that will elevate us to a higher plane. The road to enlightenment can be a very rough and painful one, but as we tread forward, we learn new clarity and are rewarded with another glimpse of the beauty that lies within our future. Great poem, excellent flow and awesome images.
A testament to your strength, to persevere and keep your balance whatever might come your way. You have trained yourself well, for it takes much work to behave this way! Great example,bravo Jude!
Eileen
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
To be able to juxtapose a clearly visible "downside" ("teardrop") with a celebration of the positive ("my nature will not allow these negative impulses...") and cause no disruption to the poetry is a gift you have, Jude.
So gently, yet so fully, do you bear your inner self... it's quite remarkable, really. katy xox
Yup, overcoming's good... if YOU can overcome, then that gives the rest of us hope. Makes me think of life on the high wire, and not giving in to the winds that seek to knock you off; looking straight ahead and neither up or down is the way to move forwards, I guess, keeping the perspectives rock solid and the vision right in front of your eyes. Vision is everything and without it "the people perish". Must be because I'm kinda tripping round the dark side of the moon myself that suddenly the lights have gone out... overdosing on Anne Sexton, I think; need to get back to Keats and Browning. Keep The Faith... has Tinka already said that?! Sorry Tinka! :)) Another fine soliloquy, Jude. TY Kate xx
and this is why I faithfully read your poems, Jude - hoping that a little of your incredible resolve in the face of a future dark or uncertain at best will rub right off on me. seriously. the first couplet is brilliant writing and your focused thinking and delivery throughout are truly amazing. Never falter from your faith. Dawn
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
What got into me?
Ron
Lisa
peace and love, Carole
It touched me and inspired me.
Thank you.
Bonnie
stick to your guns
William .......Peace
Felix
Well written!!
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
Eileen
So gently, yet so fully, do you bear your inner self... it's quite remarkable, really. katy xox
Regis