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Rising into Us
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All our dreams
Rise into
All our lives

Our hope
Rises from our love
Bonding each one of us

Together we rise into
The greater world
Risen from the light of truth

All life’s creatures
Are elevated from the hunger to create

Life ascends into the matrix
Rising from the spirit of evolution

Let us climb
Upon the mount of creative design
Bearing the fruit we have raised within us

And offer what we have learned
Remembering the source of our beginning
Hovering about

Always rising into us
 

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 Reviews of "Rising into Us"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2006
perfection!!



Vesna:)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 8, 2006
A most enthralling creative offering, Jude; powerfully spiritual and meaningful. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 7, 2006
The sagacity of Eagles is in this write. They fascinate me, whirling above the mountains with age-old knowledge and understanding within their perspectives, riding the thermals. They tell such good stories, too! I don't suppose they have "evolved" too much over the ages, but somehow they represent all of past, present and future in terms of their endurance and vision. The Secret Of Flight is in these words. A journey worth making if ever there was one, to attain this Mount Of Transfiguration. Sounds like a Utopian consummation... in this life or the next? A poem to pack the saddlebags to. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
An interesting choice of word play, which on the surface can appear to be concerning the spirit living in us, but I see more, much more layers here.
Excellent work as always Jude
:) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Thank you for lifting my spirit with this enlightening write. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
These words are a sunrise of eloquence.

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Jude, your an ancient soul who's knowledge from the Heavens is so rare...

Xxxx dove

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
So true. We have a choice, to ascend or descend, our thoughts are our motives...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
You are an uplifting spirit with your writes that will touch each reader as they ponder upon your thoughts. In other words, I like the way you think :-)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Dear Ace,

The source of our beginning and ending is one and the same. As we move with the stream, past, present and future flow through us simultaneously. This poem is pure spiritual inspiration!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Profound as always -- you are among the best in this place.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
"Let us climb upon the mount of creative design, bearing the fruit we have raised within us."

I love that portion of your poem, especially, Jude...it is SO potent!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
I had some ideas on dreams and I believe
you've captured the essence. Excellent!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
I will have to admit that your line: "All life's creatures are elevated from the hunger to create" is deeply philosophical Jude.

All life's creatures covers quite a vast spectrum of the corporeal, from the paramecium to the Donald Trumps, from the worms to the Eagles, from the seeds of all flesh, to their inevitable progeny.

And the insinuation that all life hungers to create, in my limited ability to think, has got to be deeply embedded in the Creators design.

Life begets life

Richard

Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Had to re-read this one a couple of times. Each time I found more and more depth. WTG

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Beautiful work Jude,showing what alignment of thought with harmony and enlightenment can accomplish! When we think in terms of love and all it encompasses, we attract those things around us and within us so that we are always in a mode of ascending rather than living in the way of opposites such as hate and ignorance, that keep us stagnant or descending. Soaring!;-)

eT

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
What we learn in this lifetime should be shared with those around us as our purpose here is for us alone and the story for us to tell. I think I really do miss the storytellers of old, who would tell the amazing tales of their lives in Technicolor words. Yes, the life does rise up into us and either we pass it on or it leaves with us. Very nice writing, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
This is a superb meandering of wisdom. I agree. We all should strive for the positives in life. I, for one, am happier!
Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
From dust you were created and to dust you shall return was not spoken of the soul for that is eternal. Where it will reside is up to us to determine from all that has been written in the Holy Bible. We can give credit to God who created us and follow His decrees or go our own way, the choice has been left up to us when the Lord gave us free will.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
if you don't have a dream, how you gonna make a dream come true... so true, and there is a Bali Ha waiting for everyone.

Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Rising into us is a light rising into our creative thoughts and wisdom. Wonderful poem

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Robert
We are all heirs to the Kingdom of Heaven
And just like the Master rose from the dead, we can purge ourself of sin, and gain the redemptive powers of the Almighty...
Elevating write
Peter


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