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Naked on the Dunes (haiku)
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sand dunes rest naked
stretching across breezy morn
private parts aglow


 

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 Reviews of "Naked on the Dunes (haiku)"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Erotic and natural
erotically natural
naturally erotic???

whatever lol pax A

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
I probably should've read this first, Jude. Now I've got Eileen's hunmor on my brain. LOL. Lovely ku. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Brilliant Jude!
First chance I've had to comment!!
Golden vision...
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 27, 2006
Dang, I like this! It's a wonderfully expressed Haiku, Robert!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2006
This one is soothing and beautiful Nice Form.

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Robert...this is one of the better haiku I have had the pleasure of reading...and contemplating in quite a while. Excellent...simply excellent.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
What an original way of seeing the dunes, Jude. Nicely done. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
You have captured the true essence that is Haiku in this stunning beauty, Jude. This reminds me of a photography class I once took in Death Valley, Ca. where there is a most amazing area of sand dunes. We placed a naked model amid the dunes and let our shutters fly. The sand moved in the breeze like the rippling waves of the ocean covering her then revealing her again, creating a living portrait set against the amazing backdrop of the desert. Thank you for re-awakening those memories for me and thank you for this most inspiring and beautiful Haiku.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
If beautiful, lie on the crest of sands, if ugly, lie in the trough.

The dunes do look like the curves of the naked human form.

You have a sharp eye for words.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Never quite looked at it that way before! Love the orginality of this one.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Naked beauty at it's best, reminds me of the East coast here in UK.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
beautiful imagery...leaves you basking in the after-glow, listening to the waves and watching gulls stroll the beach

Susan

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Restful yet superbly clever, Jude...perfect way to start my day!
Taylor~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
ohokayyyyyy!!

This is brilliant...ooops aglow in the sun...will burn that bun :)!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Now this leaves quite a picture! Great one!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
This one stands up!

Sage

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
An elegant portrait of nature as erotic eloquence. Art of a special kind.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Nice job, Jude. I enjoy it, but I enjoyed E. Better it had more meat on the bone so to speak.

Bobbi

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Ohhhh, a caravan party, no less! ;-)
Nice one, Jude.
Carolyn

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Naked Sand Dunes eh, hmmmm never thought of a Sand Dune in that way, but I guess they arent clothed are they. Triffic write about my favourite place to play in the summer, when not ripping it up in a dune buggy lol.
So little so much yes. Mind you you gotta watch out for ppl ( you know) in them, struth some beaches have laws to protect ppl getting run over ROFL

;)Ch'erie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Confucious say, "Lay naked upon the dunes...get sand ...by crakey".

Careful. Love your realism and the ultimate visual from the DEN in a long time.

Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Ilove how your words paint images.How effortlessly your glow arises from the sand...stunning ku Judi;-)

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
well done

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
a wonderful little (or is it BIG?) haiku. soak up the sun and spread the joy! Dawn

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Now I know where Eileen got the material for her poem. LOL

Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Great Haiku. You captured this so artistically

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
i love how haiku's say so much in so few words

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
You ought not to be looking at those privates parts . . . Whadda ya think the are called private for? LOL Very, very nice one . . .

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
As I read this I knew KB would flip out..lol

TMI for me..

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
I down-loaded the whole event from the satellite. I have two offers already for publishing the whole glowing scene.

Hey Jude ...I didn't know you could write so small and say so much!

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Now THAT sounds like fun!!!!!!! Jude, what a spectacular invitation! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

This one leaves me smiling...despite the heat. :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Oye como va, Karlos!! :)) Good to hear that we are still all in the party spirit this morning and just seeing what comes along, what turns up... quite a lot, by the look of things! Nice to know that you've still got time for a quick one on your busy vacation - poem, that is... Who does your nip'n'tuck, then?? (Yes, Andy TUCK!!) Ho-de-ho :)) As it happens, Shell Bay, where the pic of the houseboat was taken, has a thriving Nudist community, so guess a life-preserver IS all you need. Anyways, like Ed I am looking elsewhere... at your feet!! But yes, you've caught the indolent and sensual nature of the shimmering dunes in the breeze nicely here - deliciously cool in those hidden hollows where the sun don't usually shine: privacy certainly NOT guaranteed, though! :)) Rude health on display here. A flushed and cheeky write... make sure they don't burn! faKtor50 K xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Wow what a magnificent image you have created with just a few simple words and you are so right, sand dunes always have brought to my mind images of a woman's soft warm curves. Well done Jude.

Fee

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Robert

You bare all the essentials in this quintessential ku..
Excellent offering

Peter

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
I've seen that, but turned away embarrassed...e

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
Quite a visual 'ku, Robert!


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