Just lovely!
Love and Peace,
B&R

you truly are a poet, this is another stunning piece of work, sensual, nature's light glowing and a story unfolds from the struggling through to those precious words whispered...
I must find a way to read more, somehow, has been so long so I am grateful to have found this, today, Thank You, Poet, indeed...
One can learn much from the deceptively simple, yet so full way you have with this artform...
Thank You,
m.

Utterly beautiful!

Magic.

Ron

an outstanding write Robert

Paece
William

I do believe that these three words are the most difficult to utter, yes, even more so than "I am sorry." To admit that we need someone is to understand that we do not possess all that we must have to survive and with that knowledge comes a certain sense of weakness and/or vulnerability. The truth is that there is strength in numbers and we do draw our strength from those who surround us as well as from within ourselves and with the release of control we find a certain peace. Beautiful, rich images paint your verse, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

well said

So much heat generated here through your words, Jude, which is picked up on and radiated amply by the astute comments in response and observation below. Much intensity which, as Eileen rightly says, would be "wondrous or woeful" to the ears to which the emotion is addressed. A very poignant write which, although turning the written spotlight squarely on "her", reflects clear as a mirror-image on the passionate longing of the Voice which betrays the POV that, in fact, her expression of need is as "The breath of heaven" to those "waiting ears", rather than a bind. Wonderful sensitivity in your couplets, expressing thirst, struggle and skin-shedding. New birth in the souls of both parties would surely come with this blessed release. Soulful and epic, this first opening of love's floodgates is ALWAYS dramatic and forceful, no matter how quietly and gently stated. Most tenderly and delicately observed, like a sigh of relief. Totally melting and gorgeous. I especially like that you have, as it were, caused all of nature to shake, quake and tremble as it pauses to "peek in" on this intimate moment... the sun leaning over clouds is a beautiful concept. TY K xx

Robert

I concur with Richard below completely
All is in perfect synchronicity..

Peter

This is another brilliant work from a poetic master. Your words are descriptive and excite your poetic passion.

Beautiful Robert!

It is amazing - the continual fluidity of all things and how life is formed and realized in the stream.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Wow!

Whoa! Passion comes slowly with calculating sensuality that approaches climax. Beautifully penned.
Susan

Three of the most heartfelt words there are. For the one who hears them it can be wondrous or woeful...Superb emotional perception .

What a wonderful moment this is!...and you have captured all the beauties within this moment.

Wonderful write, Robert!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

This is exquisite...such depth and wonderful passion. I was really moved. Panda :)

The breath of heaven
Waits within the magic of her words

Wow, must be one extremely powerful enchantress, Robert.

I liked this poem because it grew and grew right up to a great climax. Victor

Beautiful my friend, I felt like I too was watching this lady through your eyes and felt her emotions and yours.

Fee

Need can supercede love in its intensity. There is the need of someone you love passionately and that need is love personified.

In the words of Rudyard Kipling " The Bare (bear) necessities" :):)
Oh yeah!

;)Ch'erie

We all need to be needed by someone :-) Love the descriptions you have used!

Ah sweet sounds of seduction. Well done Jude, I bow to your pen. <Mikii>

Oh, this one bathes in passive languor, timeless and absolute emotion...reinforcement and genuine beauty in those three words, "I need you" which takes a great length of time to muster a burst of courage to speak these powerful words without a speech impediment caused from the fear of intimacy. When there is no fear and "I need you" is audible finally, the heart can direct Words of Necessity to one great purpose, herein lies the gentleness of the power of love bringing it to fruition...

Sage

Hey we coulda done this in collaboration....now I know the salt water and wind blew my mind across the ocean......lol!!

Sorry I hope this is okay with you but boy this is like water and Ice....liquid it would for ever be no matter how you change the form of it...now ain't that a poetic line...lol!!
Anyways here goes let me share what I meant by this!!

Read my song "Crying Guitar"

http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?AuthorID=11577&id=149999

Love Tinka

Need you? Yes, yes I do. ;-) Sorry, Jude. Couldn't resist. This poem positively smolders. It palpitates with passion. Hmmm. ~~Nordette

Nice...

Elizabeth