Recently, I was made aware
Of your procrustean reaction
To the contents
Inside my poetic depot
Of protean concepts
And your malicious attempt to belittle
My polychromatic perspective
Became even more evident
Deliberately, your delphic commentary
And obscure analysis
Is solely expressed by your refusal
To expand on impressions
Beyond the myopic coil
Of famished synapses
So, all that left for me to say
In clear cut “magnanimous” terms
Is go sh*t
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Reviews of "Off My Chest"
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2006
I so to like your style! You say it all so well!!!!.... Holly
You can beat your chest - and flex your powerfully muscular Eagle's Quill - any time you choose!
LOL... it just makes your writing all the more DYNAMIC!
Bless you! Love Rhonda
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
Even in anger ...you write it like no other! Wow! Panda :)
Venting helps us to spit out the bad after tste and clear the air. I can't imagine who would go toe to toe with a wordsmith. They surely must have a death wish.
Susan
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
Now do you feel better???? Thats all that counts this was creative, and effective. :)
Not sure of a lot of the big words here Jude but sure sounds you are really peed off at someone, hope the one you are aiming this at knows it is for him/her.
Fee
WHOA!!!!! Jude, I'm so glad I came to read this. Superb writing! Yeah!!!! You tell them!!!!!! Some people just don't have anything else better to do but to cause others' grieve.
I hope you won't let these people, or whoever it is to get to you.
off your chest and into our hearts, Jude. can't help but love you for such an eloquent response to one apparently already quite comfortable with b.s. looking for more of your polychromatic perspectives and praying you'll send me a nice little note if I ever were to offend you unintentionally :) Dawn
Geez, Bob, I hope I never get you angry at me...cause I would need a dictionary in hand at the time...who would say anything obscure about intelligent writes like yours...I agree with your last two words though I would add GO SCREW! ED
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
Oh my goodness, if this is for real, Jude, I do not know what to say. Your a profoundly spiritual man who's free spirited and walks a revelation free path---I cannot imagine anyone humiliating you of all people.You are the deepest, grandest soul that see's through spirit and the spirit makes your life----Your an artistic mind and I pray all is well with you.I appreciate everytime you leave me comments. I get excited...Understand the most ones filled with glorious light are at time tormented. Look what happened to Yeshua..I mean you have seen it happen to me over and over at the Den but God told me I had and must put aside carnal shares to bring the light.I never go directly on the board, I only simply track people and put myself out becausse I am too clairvoyant to see what everyone writes...I have to watch my energy...I try to read only good and watch out for for Witchaft, do NOT read black magic because it can silently be altered...Both of us are real clairvoyant... Many people are insanely jealous of everything thing about me BUT I KNOW I have a higher purpose.I stand beside you, for I know your called too to awaken the masses, the sleeping prophets awaken we must----One must humble one souls but humbleness is angelic, Godly...It shows others we are not dicated by the carnal secular things and attitudes...Have a wonderful day, Jude---
Well I did get my on line dictionary for this poem and so could understand your frustration. Your ending is of course the right course of action. Victor
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
I could bring out my dictionary to understand all of how you told someone to go shit but...........the last line says it all ;-)
Can I show this poem to someone I would love to say the same thing to? I promise I will pull out the dictionary first to understand every word :-)
LOL, Jude you can't even Blow it out your ... without making music outa poetry, so whoever tried to belittle you, only inspired your muse more proficiently than before, which is what we say in colloquial terms, Poetic Justice LOL
Good onya
;)Ch'erie
Well!!!! I certainly hope that it is not me to whom you are referring and I hope that it never will be. Your ire and wrath are something I do not care to have aimed in my direction. Your pen drips poison upon the page and hopefully onto the person who has nothing better to do in their life than degrade others.
Take care,
Sherry
hahahahaha;-) You're a treasure!Perfect!If a study was done, I believe they'd find constipated people write constipated poetry.Instead of taking a laxative and improving themselves they demean others.
Sorry about the emotion that provoked it, but ... YEAH ... stick that word sword right into his/her gullet and twist it. Oh how I can relate to this bloody emotion!
Great choice of words to extricate the rancor from your soul. Gotta beware of those delphicambiguous personalities who wear magnanimous shrouds and try to sabotage the color tubes in your soul.
wow! I learned a few new words from this! for what it's worth, any poem that has me going to Dictionary.com with glee instead of instantly exiting the poet's page because of frustration is exceptional in my book! this is superbly written, your frustration has been expressed while remaining leashed.
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this to, but I think for them,it's too eloquently written.
Sylvia
Peace,
Carolyn
Micke
Love and Peace,
B&R
You can beat your chest - and flex your powerfully muscular Eagle's Quill - any time you choose!
LOL... it just makes your writing all the more DYNAMIC!
Bless you! Love Rhonda
TRASK
Susan
Paul;-)
Fee
I hope you won't let these people, or whoever it is to get to you.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
Aberjhani
~~Carmen :-)
Xxx dove
of
speech!
good for you Ace!
Can I show this poem to someone I would love to say the same thing to? I promise I will pull out the dictionary first to understand every word :-)
Oh I think we feel the same today...if looks could kill I wouda been in jail today!!
Love Tinka
Good onya
;)Ch'erie
Take care,
Sherry
Ron
ET
Sorry about the emotion that provoked it, but ... YEAH ... stick that word sword right into his/her gullet and twist it. Oh how I can relate to this bloody emotion!
Great choice of words to extricate the rancor from your soul. Gotta beware of those delphicambiguous personalities who wear magnanimous shrouds and try to sabotage the color tubes in your soul.
Benisons ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
That was a mouthful
great writing and expression of your feeling
at the moment of pesponse
Peace
William
Have a go0d day...
Spoken with the airs and graces of a man from The Bronx..:)
Peter
Susan